| "From within the Flames" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 10:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
DD: I'm so loving this story! Poor Jou!
YD: BURN YOU BASTARD!!
DD: Calm down yami.
YD: NO WAY! NO ONE HURTS MY JOU!!
DD: *rolls eyes* Anyway...can't wait for the next chapter!
YD: Me too...so long as Jou's okay. |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 08:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
OH! WRITE MORE!!! SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Oh no! Jou!
LD: Hey, that rhymed.
Karen: o.O Ooookkkkk
LD: Wonder who Bakura's 'prey' is. * snickers *
Karen: This is so awsomely awesome! I absolutly love it!
LD: Yeah, it is looking good. Needs more Seto, so it's a good thing he'll be in the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story is screaming, can't you hear it? listen...
finish me, finish me
see? it's calling...
...^_^ great job, plot, chapters..good good. |
Reviewed By: NIta On: April 16, 2003 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
his is brilliant, this is amajoing, this is spectacular, send me more? Is there a site with more on it? Please??????? |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm looking forward to more of this story. Hope it will be as good as your Ronin Warriors stories. |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 12:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
That rocked! So Joey's a firestarter? Too cool! Please write more soon! I'm dying to know what happens next |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Karen: This is very well expressed.
LD: Yeah, and the plot is good, too
Karen: But why does every feel the need to torture the puppy?
LD: He is so cute that he makes a very sympathetic victim.
Karen: I like the connection with the Flame Swordsman... done in a new way...
LD: Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Ru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fanfic. I love all the pairings you have here and I like your idea for an AU. It's very good. There were some slight grammar issues and sometimes you were missing words, but overall the quality was very good. Keep updating! I like it! |
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