| "Shinigami's Gem" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyJessy On: August 02, 2003 08:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, i know at the end that you said this fic was really dark, but i think that (compaired to the last chapter) it is progressing much more realisticly, although i still hold that you will have to get Wufei to do alot before Duo will trust him again. Almost killing you isn't something that is easily forgiven.
Anyways, i am enjoying the fic! Keep writing! :) |
Reviewed By: Utsukushii Ryu On: July 31, 2003 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good. I can't believe you left me in this kind of suspense! I want to know what happens next. Anywho, you should keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Kae On: July 28, 2003 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had to change my rate on creativity. Poor poor Duo!!!!!!!!! Hope Wuffie stays sexualy frustrated...It would serve 'im right!!! I don't like the hair thing. It erks me. So enjoyment stays kinda under the weather. And the realationship between Duo and Fei is off. The forgetfulness on Duo's part shouldn't have even been possible, their's too much bad blood for Duo to forget WHO he is with.
And..um..well damn!! The hair thing erks ME!!! (sob) Should cut Fei's pony off!! ( grabs super buzz shaver and bowling ball wax) (chases Wuffie and cackles evily) Feel bether now... Like your story, please continue. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kae On: July 28, 2003 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man!!! Wufei is a BASTARD!!! Dang!! I like bitchy/sweet Wufei better in all stories!! AND he cut DUO's hair!!!! That's a total ticket to hell...hope fei likes warm weather? Gona miss 'im. Hope Duo has super inhuman hair growth powers?! Maybe? He probly does to have his hair so neat. Mine was always a battle when it was that long. ^_^ I'd probly be driven to murder if someone cut it that short.
Like the story though. Very cool.
Bye-a |
Reviewed By: balck beauty On: July 27, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, more, write more soon. I love this fic, keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: Oni On: July 26, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually I love all your fics but I thought I would write a review here to tell you that. Keep writing I can't wait to read more of all your fics. |
Reviewed By: LadyJessy On: July 24, 2003 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story, although i don't really like 5x2 stories (although i am intrigued by the possible 1x6x2 threesome thats been hinted at).
Despite the fact that i like this story, there are some things that i don't really think fit in this story. One is how everything progressed after Wufei cut Duo's hair off. I truly thing that was the worst mistake that Wufei could've made. Something that Duo would never forgive him for. Duo is already skittish about violence b/c of his last master's treatment, and what Wufei did only confirmed to Duo that Wufei is a basterd merc and a cruel master. Therefore, cutting off Duo's hair should either break Duo and/or cause Duo's anger to rise even more. I could hardly believe that Wufei thought that there was any way for him to gain Duo's trust after that. Cutting of his hair was probably the one thing that would garentee that Duo never trusts him.
Anyways, that is my opinion. Take it or leave it. As it is now, i find it unrealistic though. However, i will continue to read your story, since i do like it. :) |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: July 23, 2003 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ADD MORE!!!! *dies* |
Reviewed By: Chris On: July 22, 2003 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
THE BRAID!! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO CUT THE BRAID!?!?! ::SOBS:: ::slighty recovers:: Good job by the way...but..::sniff sniff:: THE BRAID...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHA ::GASP:: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! ::SOBS AND CONVULSES:: THE BRAID!!! AH, WUFEI WHY!! WHY!!! |
Reviewed By: paranormal On: July 21, 2003 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! why did you chop off his braid!!!! poor duo! *sobs* ok, well i think it's a /wonderful/ story...most definatly keep writing, you're really talented. it can be so hard to find a good story here on mediaminer, but i have to give you credit for coming up with and writing such a brilliant story. can't wait to see when the next chapter comes out!! |
Reviewed By: Flash On: July 18, 2003 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it but WHY THE HAIR????? NOT THE HAIR! IT'S HIS SYMBOL!! urk i wanna kill 'Fei now, even though Duo was kinda asking for it...GAH! |
Reviewed By: Suzume Tori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 17:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRRR I HATE YOU WUFEI! OF ALL THE DISHONORABLE EVIL THINGS YOU HAD TO CUT HIS BRAID! YOU CAN'T FIX MISTAKES LIKE THAT IT TAKES MORE THAN TEN YEARS TO GROW THAT SORT OF HAIR GODDAM IT GAHHHHHH!!!!! THE BRAID! THE BRAID! **mourns** |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 20:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay, another chapter, I like this story so far, I feel bad for Duo, his hair, (sob) but I wonder what Wufei is up to with Duo hair??? :) |
Reviewed By: Cath Nye On: July 16, 2003 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Three words... Why. His. Braid? other than that tragic part, great fic! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 16, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made Wufei out to be such a mean person. Poor Dou *snifs*
Anyways, keep up the good job. |
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