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Reviewed By: Animegirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2010 17:30 CST
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(tears well up and bottom lip quivers)y havnt u updated yet?!(voice cracks)I need to know what happened!(voice gets stronger as tears trail down horror stricken face)YOU HAV TO FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED BAKA!
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Reviewed By: ep On: June 06, 2007 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaahhh so depressing!!!! i'm seriosly enjoying the story so i'd be so greatful if you'de update. soon. really soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover1221(logged out) On: July 01, 2006 13:04 CDT
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Oniisan means big sister nisan or aniki means big brother other than that this fic is great so far.
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Reviewed By: Cyradish On: June 15, 2006 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should continue writing this fic, 'cause it has to be a really good fic to get me to praise it by review. ;) I've really enjoyed it and I have to admit that this is one of the best Kagome/Sesshoumaru fanfictions I've ever read! (and i've read many!) Please continue it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (not likely logged in :P) On: January 22, 2006 01:34 CST
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*sigh* I missed my Sessy-sama. *giggles* And Miroku too. *hehehehe* *sigh* I sure wish the guy I like is interested in me. Even though he hasn't seen much anime... at least his taste in music is good. (Hell, better than mine) I'm hoping I can talk with him again this week. (He works at bestbuy and we talked for almost 2 hours onenight while he was working/helping me pick out cds :) ) Glad to know you're still writing, Eri. Miss you! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Pye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you 1333 out of ten for overall rating!!! Stupid thing doesn't go that high! *huf* how rude. I can't wait till you update again!! U ROCK MY WORLD!!!!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 13:13 CST
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YAY an update WEEEEEE. cant wait for the others!!!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 23:40 CST
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Sesshy moving in. And Kagome got a dog which kinda sounds like Sesshy in his true demon form. But he looks more cute than dangerous. Inu not in the story alot. I hope he comes later. And Rin Miroku, Sango and more.
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Reviewed By: jc On: March 23, 2005 10:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this storyline to ^bits! I really love your style and hope that you finish this one :) I also how you continue A Demon Should Act Like a Demon, it was a favorite too. Take care!
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Reviewed By: DragonGrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's absolutely great. I love your other stories as well. Sorry to hear about A Demon Should Act Like A Demon. I really loved that one too. I hope you don't give up on it, it's great. Good work and hope you update soon, plz. I'm hooked now!!!
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Reviewed By: charming142 On: August 10, 2004 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story. i hope you can get another chapter up!
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Reviewed By: Phoebe On: August 03, 2004 19:38 CDT
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Thank you for updating you r story. You are one of my fav writers and I am sorry to hear about your story being plagarized :( It makes me sad :( Dont give up!! I love oyur work and look forward to reading it some more! email me any time ! rorey22@aol.com I would love to hear from you
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (does she ever log in?) On: August 03, 2004 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* That was too cute! Well, the ending. Not poor Suikotsu's slipup. *lol* Ban got what he deserved. *grins more* Jakotsu is the sweetest. Fukafukashita is so CUTE... Fuka likes Sesshoumaru. :) Well, respects, for now. Wow, I just love it when you reveal more about Sess. (I just love him more and more...:) *blinks* He saw her before??? Wow! That is too cool. *grin* I have this thing about seeing people once... and then meeting them/getting to know them. You think, "I'd like to get to know them," and often wish you had more time. Sesshoumaru is so lucky to get a chance like that. ^_^ (He almost knows how I felt in May...;) I can't wait for more, and I'm glad you finally updated. (Was it really almost a year since your last update?) I hope this review finds you well. Take care, Eri. Janelle.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: August 03, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya! You finally updated. I do hope you continue your story.
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Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 22:32 CDT
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Yay, I'm so glad you finally updated. Please, please, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Flare-Chaa On: August 02, 2004 14:58 CDT
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Very good so far. ^^ I hope you can update really soon.. -Clings to the story-
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Title: You are back, Yay
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A perfect 10. I am glad you are back writing your stories. I hope to see more soon. This story has been going great. As have your others. Sorry about your story being stolen. Nothing is worse than that. Well I will be looking forward to more. Later
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I visited San Francisco just last summer, and I have to say, the City has captivated my imagination and a part of my heart ever since. With your smart, easy-going writing style (and a killer setting :-), "The City By the Bay" breaks the mold of fanfiction superiority. Phenomenal work-I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings!
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Title: i've missed your fics!!
Reviewed By: yuki (it's really yukiko3 though) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 10:08 CDT
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I'm so glad that you're back...well kinda. Please update all your fics soon. I've really missed reading them and am anxious to know what happens next in all of them. Thank you so much for writing such great fics...i'm having problems finding ones i like and yours are always so good and i know that i won't be reading some weird ones. Thanks again!!
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Reviewed By: okibi On: July 23, 2004 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is an amazing fic! i cannot wait until you update!
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Reviewed By: rebxl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 22:47 CDT
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PLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE GRACE US BY UPDATING!!! PUHLEASE *giving author pusy n boot eye from shrek 2* 8-}
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: MoonDiva On: February 22, 2004 15:35 CST
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I luv this story. But you havent updated in like FOREVER. please update, and when you do, continue to update until its finished!! Ur still working on this right>>? I hope you are bc i will be mad if you arent. Great story!! please please please update
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 19:56 CST
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Most interesting story! I absolutely love it. I hope you'll update soon.
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Reviewed By: trihn On: December 16, 2003 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely adore this fic. i thought ou had stopped updating at some point, but anyways, keep it up. pdate a.s.a.p, please!!
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000 On: December 09, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*Jumping up and Dowm* PLz update Sooooooooon OK
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Reviewed By: SpringSakura07 On: December 06, 2003 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did a great job. i also like your story "The Hunt for the Shikon no Tama" a lot too. i really hope you update soon. you have a lot of potential in your writing skills. sorry for my bad grammer and spelling, i've just kind of been sleep deprived along with babysitting 5 kids at once. lol. anyways, UPDATE SOON!!!! good luck with the rest of your stories too!
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Reviewed By: dragonflyelj On: November 29, 2003 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first time on MM.org, I usually am on AFF.net, purousing through the titles, yours caught my interest, and I am glad it did, I read all of the chapters you have posted, and you really hooked me, I want to read more!
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Reviewed By: D.d. [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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a most awesome chapter! i'm happy that you updated, i really love this fic, yes, i very much do! continue soon! D.d.
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Reviewed By: inuphoria On: November 28, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think sess is really developign an inufatuation for kagome.
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Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 20:34 CST
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I'm glad your back! *YAY* I've been waiting for an update, its seems like forever! Another wonderful chappie, and I hope you find some time soon to update! Can't wait. ~mandi evilyungone@yahoo
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