| "Changing Makes a Difference" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 07:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mono: I don't hate you! You are wonder ful, I mean, not many people update as often as you do, and this fic must be a time consuming effort for you. Thankies for doing it though, I really want to see what is going to happen. Are you going to try to kill someone off? Oh, and why did you kill sugoroku off so quickly, I mean ouch. But thinking about it a guess that it makes sense in the whole story scheme.
Kani: *Gags Mono* Sorry 'bout that, sometimes she just won't shut up! Great job, keep writing and have a great day! |
Reviewed By: ying and yang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ying: we love your story but, sadly, we are retarded. why is Yami afraid of needles?
yang: yeah, why?
ying: plzzz continue
yang: yeah, continue ^_~ |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chapter. can't wait for the next |
Reviewed By: Exotica [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I really love your fic, but there is a slight problem.... The only thing wrong is the way you wrote Yuugi's personality... I know he's inocent and all, but you make him seem weak and useless... Like he's scared of sharp objects or something... You just made him seem too weak is all.. Other wise keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 03:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow..this is turning out to be a really good story. The different scenerio (such as Yugi being ill) is.. refreshing. Great work and I hope you post soon! |
Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story!! Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 23:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapters! Sorry I haven't reviewed recently. I really like the way this story is going so far. I hope you can post more soon! |
Reviewed By: MillenniumPurityMegami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*continually clicks button to find next chapter but stares blankly as none come up* ....There's gotta be more...Please let there be more...For the love of Ra, get the next up soon.
I love this story, the title the plot the drama...It's all soo good, and damn people, trying to hurt Yugi like that, kill them all >< *pulls out sword*
Ahem...well I thought it was quite sad especially Yami and Yugi w/ their pasts&problems but it's so sweet how they fall in love. Get it up soon please don't torture poor Yugi-chan much longer me don't want him to die! *hugs plushies* Mew...once again update soon love it want it need it. Ja! *takes off with plushies. |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love your fic since hte beginning and all i can say is i can't wait for hte ending. I hope yami does talk to Jo' soon and yug' never finds out about the bet. Poor little guy... about the neelds I know hte feeling. I have deep viens and they roll. One week I got poked wiht a needle 8 times in 2 doctor appointments in a week! that was nnot fun. Oh yeah, is Anzu or Tea (forgot whihc name u gave her) begins to butt in PLEASE do something bad to her!! Kick her off hte roof, let her get runned over, anything!! Or let me use her for a punching bag. I have serious frustration to burn off. ood story and can't wait to see waht you add next. Bye bye! |
Reviewed By: Coffee On: June 06, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'd give ya 100 but doesn't go that high --.-- |
Reviewed By: MJ On: June 06, 2003 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm glad things turned out ok! I was glaring for a minute there ("don't you DARE kill him, bitch!" eh heh heh ^^; heat of the moment)
So now.....bet's off. Are they gonna screw like mad rabid squirrels anyway? *toothy hentai grin* |
Reviewed By: MJ On: June 06, 2003 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES, I hate Tea with the fiery passion of a thousand suns. *burns the bitch in effigy, heeheemwahahaha*
On a happier note, I'm completely and totally addicted to this story, although if anyone is mean to Yugi in a physical manner, I think I might cry. This reminds me SO much of myself in high school. Too bad I didn't meet my prince charming till a month before graduation. ^^ (I made HIM wait too. *giggles*) |
Reviewed By: Rayne On: June 04, 2003 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god i loved that story it was great! And i so agree about what you said about Tea. I HATE HER FUCKING GUTS!!!!!!!!!She gits on my nerves! But any way i loved it! if you are going to keep typing pleas do so if you can that is.... wel thats it for now, later! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: FairysGift On: June 03, 2003 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have created a masterpiece!!! your only downfall was your spelling but i'm sure you'll try harder in your next chapters! Can't wait for chapter ten! |
Reviewed By: FairysGift On: June 03, 2003 05:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
This review is about your friend.i know you only get to see her during vacations and stuff so why don't you try sending her e-mails whenever you get the chance or you could write to her every few days and theres nothing wrong with phoning her at night time (unless you have homework).what i'm saying is try to meet up with her more often . put aside specific dates for each other and do things like go to the cinema , go swimming and shopping together.Doing activities when you meet up might help your friendship bond develop more so next time she goes somewhere else where you can't see her that often you can ask her for her e-mail address or phone number or even her home address before she goes so you can always keep in touch. |
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