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 Reviewed By: rehobeachlady [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
There are quite a few versions of this story that I've come across, and yours is the only one that I've gone past the first chapter. And you are also the first person that I've actually written a review for so I'm sincerely hoping to see this updated and completed :o)
 Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to see the end results of Sesshomaru and Kagome.
 Title: More
Reviewed By: no_touchy_my_sesshy  On: March 29, 2005 16:15 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Will you be updating soon? Many of good stories take a long to update leaving loyal readers in suspence and they eventually stop being loyal and then, when the readers stop checking then writer updates. Or some times the readers don't give up but the writer eventually give up and the readers feel empty. But I'm sure you don't want to read all of this. It will slow down your eventual (or not) update. So with that I'll leave you with my meaning less words.
 Reviewed By: kaiku7194 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 28, 2005 17:35 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great Job! Please updates soon! add more chapters pls!!!! I really want to know what happens next! pls contact me when you have added more chapters! thnx! azn_babe56@hotmail.com
 Title: love it
Reviewed By: YoukaiLover [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 27, 2005 23:54 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very good update please
 Title: ok sorry
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 25, 2005 13:52 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you kno how at the end of your last chappie you said to add my E-mail name to that list well after giving you that review i tryed to go there but couldn't can you please E-mail me or add me on there i really wanna see this continue my E-mail is MEAN_Punk@kiwibox.com
 Title: wow......
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 25, 2005 13:50 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow... that was just wow..... keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
 Title: i lik the idea of yer fic
Reviewed By: Sam fr Canada  On: September 29, 2004 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the idea of yer fic there is a similar one written by youkai yume and that's good too. . . i think that author is farher ajead though but still try to update cus u gots sum loyal fans rite. . .u don't wanna lose em
 Reviewed By: kal  On: July 26, 2004 03:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
you need to update you can't stop updatting without giving a reason
 Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Hime no Kagome  On: May 30, 2004 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE! Please? *gives cookies* UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Hime no Kagome  On: May 30, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! DON'T STOP WRITING IT! OR ELSE I WILL SHOOT YOU!!!!!!!!(and i really will)
 Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2004 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE, DAMMIT! This is so awesome, it's so cute, I love Sesshoumaru and I want him to be all cozy with Kagome... PLEASE? [sniffle]
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2004 17:25 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please please please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: AAAAWESOMME
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2004 21:45 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Would like to know when Sesshoumaru and Kagome get together.
 Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2004 21:26 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi, I like the story even though it's so Dinseyish(I know this isn't a word), especially with your twists. I look foward to seeing how it ends and who gets to play Gaston. Or is the Kouga?? jschu25
 Reviewed By: Kura-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2003 18:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I've always loved the story of Beauty and the Beast ... with Sess and Kagome instead I love it even more ^^ Keep up the great work ~ Write more!! (waited so long from chap 4 and only 1 chapter update?? T____T) Ganbate!! (cheers you on)
 Title: trihn
Reviewed By: strawberry shortcake [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 22, 2003 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love it. its seems so long since you've updated. please update again soon. bye bye
 Title: Review
Reviewed By: Akai-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 22, 2003 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
As always, your stories are awesome; this one is no exception. I'm glad you decided to update this one, it's really good. Keep it comin!
 Reviewed By: iram  On: October 22, 2003 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow! i love this story! i also love ur style of writing! plz keep on going and have a happy ending! lol! p.s. is beauty and the beast one of your fave fairy tales too?
 Reviewed By: MistressFluffy  On: October 22, 2003 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great! I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the way you protray SesshoMaru emotions. They are actually believable. Update soon!
 Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Aira^o^  On: October 22, 2003 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, MY GOD!! . . . . . you update!! : : sniff, sniff : : . . . . . . do you know how long I have been waiting for you to continue your fic? . . . . . But i'm glad you have update though . . . . and yes I love the mushy sence . . . . . . .and now .. what else can I say except from please update soon?
 Title: Cool!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Stephanie [Inuyasha Fan 15] [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 17, 2003 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Update Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Demoness_of_Myth [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2003 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is such a Great story. Ihope that you update it soon.
 Reviewed By: hishiro  On: July 04, 2003 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I applaude you....so far very well done...I cannot wait for more....it is not everyday that you see a fairytale like B&B crossed with IY....very interesting!^-^
 Reviewed By: benton  On: June 27, 2003 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey!! how could you leave us so long with such a cliffhanger. *sigh* good thing i love your story. update again soon pleeaassse!
 Reviewed By: Kouga-sanLover [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 26, 2003 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story. PLease do continue.I can't wait for the next chapter. Please do not take long!
 Reviewed By: xxnoirnekoxx [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 24, 2003 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i think this is a very well written fiction. it's captivating as well. the over all plotline of a twisted version of beauty and the beast adds to it. i like the mystery at the end of the fourth chapter. keeps the reader interested. please continue
 Reviewed By: Wildfire  On: June 21, 2003 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah, very interesting. ^_^ I always enjoy a good Sess/Kag fanfic. Keep updating! ^.^
 Reviewed By: Alee-chan  On: July 17, 2003 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was great!! keep it up
 Reviewed By: Kagura-Hime [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey, just wanted to say what a great job your doing, and to keep it up!! i'll be waiting for your next update!! good luck, and stay on track!! if ya have time, could you check out my story? it' posted here, and on ff.net thankies! hope to hear from you!
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