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Reviewed By: shadypony On: May 08, 2003 10:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh me oh my the wonders of adrenaline. Keep writing more please. This is awsome.
SHADY |
Reviewed By: Tramp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Chapter one was great, if short. Chapter two was well written, with a few grammatical errors here and there. The only problem I had with it was that the love-making was too rushed. It was like "wam, bam, and it's over. I'd have drawn it out more and gone into more detail. Chapter three was excellent. I loved the way you dealt with the characters' conflicting emotions and trying to deal with the reprocussions of the previous night's "events". I wonder what other reprocussions there might be... |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh! I am really enjoying this. Glad I added you to my "faves" list! Can hardly wait for the next update . . . |
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