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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:58 CST
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That was a cute chapter!!!!!! And soo funny with Hojo and she was crying and trying talk and Inuyasha didn't know what to do and he was staring at her stomach!!!!!!! Sooo cute!!!!! I wonder how he's going to act when her stomach gets really big!?!?!? Update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady On: March 16, 2004 03:44 CST
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Fun to read! Thanks for sharing! One note on grammar: "sense" is mis-spelled as "since" twice towards the bottom of this page.
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Title: Write more please
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic.When are you going to write more. I want more.This is best fan fic ever!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 20:30 CST
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I'm so glad you finally updated!!!!!!! I love this story, and since she said she was a little young to be getting married I would think about 17. Update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelofdiamonds(inuchan) On: February 24, 2004 15:31 CST
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this is great! and i'd say she's about 17
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 00:20 CST
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Hello...uh, i think that kagome is probably around oh 17 years. dont know why, but anyways. finally got back to reading this fic. i guess that this review is more to ask you to keep up the good work, since i cant really think at the moment. oh well, hope kagome does start feeling better, and shame on sango and miroku for spying. they really do seem to have a habbit of doing that, although shippou usually accompanies them...but oh well. wow, guess i actually did have something to say. later.
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: February 01, 2004 14:54 CST
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And forgot to say that since InuYasha (hanyou) and Kagome (human) The baby will be only a quarter demon... so... it wouldn't be exactly like InuYasha... or any other hanyou....
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: February 01, 2004 14:51 CST
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Great Chapter! I was waiting patiently, and I am glad you are getting comfortable or whatever!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 13:01 CST
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I'm so glad your back!!!!!!!! Inuyasha shouldn't care what other peopl think of his relationship with Kagome, I'm sure she doesn't and why is he mad at her now??? Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Irrel (not signed in) On: January 15, 2004 19:21 CST
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why did you stop?! it was getting good!!! =) I love this!
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Reviewed By: SleepySango [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
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no offense... but it's "youkai," not "youkia." If you're going to use Japanese, use it properly. Mangled words interrupt the flow of narration, and are just irritating as hell. Not as bad as when people pepper their fics with Japanese that has no place and is grammatically fucked over, but still, it's best to make sure you're doing everything properly. Just a heads-up on the proper spelling.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 09:43 CST
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That chapter was so sweet and romantic!!! Pllease update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 21:36 CST
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I've been waiting a long time for you to update this story, just one little chapter come on
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update sooooooooon
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