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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 13:01 CST Comment/Review: I'm so glad your back!!!!!!!! Inuyasha shouldn't care what other peopl think of his relationship with Kagome, I'm sure she doesn't and why is he mad at her now??? Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Irrel (not signed in) On: January 15, 2004 19:21 CST Comment/Review: why did you stop?! it was getting good!!! =) I love this!
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Reviewed By: SleepySango [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 02:22 CST Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: no offense... but it's "youkai," not "youkia." If you're going to use Japanese, use it properly. Mangled words interrupt the flow of narration, and are just irritating as hell. Not as bad as when people pepper their fics with Japanese that has no place and is grammatically fucked over, but still, it's best to make sure you're doing everything properly. Just a heads-up on the proper spelling.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 09:43 CST Comment/Review: That chapter was so sweet and romantic!!! Pllease update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 21:36 CST Comment/Review: I've been waiting a long time for you to update this story, just one little chapter come on
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 21:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please update sooooooooon
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Reviewed By: tinycowz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 23:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Write more, Write more!!!!!! I am so in love with this story. Great plot, super writing. Not a cliff hanger but it draws you in, makes you invloved with the people. Wonderful style. Please hurry with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: lxia On: September 23, 2003 16:24 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ITS ABOUT TIME!!! I was begining to think you had abandoned this fic. Now to make up for MONTHS of no upadating you gotta update a lot! PLEEEESE!
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Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 17:49 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great !!
Loved it !!!
It's wonderful !! go on !!
waiting for the next chapter^^
Kirisame ^.^ |
Reviewed By: EarthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 00:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ok iknow i shouldn't be laughing this hard but that was funny an also very eduational story...but i can't stop laughing sorry it was a rell ygood story though |
Reviewed By: Lutra On: July 06, 2003 00:59 CDT Comment/Review: I love your story thus far. Please update soon! Before we all die of anixiety!! |
Reviewed By: Amanda a.k.a. Kazk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 15:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YOU HAVE TO UPDATE. THIS IS A GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT STORY. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
~Amanda a.k.a. Kazk |
Reviewed By: Inu Nagi On: June 20, 2003 13:34 CDT Comment/Review: keep it going..were all waiting for an update soon!!!!!!!
*begs her to do another chapter* |
Reviewed By: Rune2003 On: June 10, 2003 06:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!UPDATE SOON |
Reviewed By: Syn_AnimeFanChick On: June 09, 2003 00:09 CDT Comment/Review: Its lovly I put it on favorites in hopes to read more, really funny too EWWWW MOOOOOOOOOM KAGOME AND INU YASHA!!!!! lol I busted up at that...hehehe DOGGY EARS *rubs the demonic doggy ears* keep up the good work...I started reading it a bit skeptical at first but I ended up loving teh story, even though (no offence) shippo seemed a bit more aware of things than usual |
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