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 Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 20, 2003 22:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
::eyes pops out:: o_O WOW!!!!! THAt is QUITE informative!! o_O SO MANY lessons? I'm jealous, but anyways no wonder the whole musical plot ^_^. There are too many beats to remember @_@ since I only know how to play a recorder.
Quite interesting chapter again.
Heero here is very bad... it's getting better and better. ^__^ I sure hope they're going to convince him ASAP. I've this feeling there's going to be something very very interesting happening here ^__^ Were you hinting a small 3+4 sign there too?

Please update soon!! Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2003 15:57 EDT
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::laughs:: That is an interesting chapter ^-^. Sounds yummy. And I can agree with that if one's very hungry. ^-^ I can imagine them...
I wonder what will happen next. Wufei is really getting a nice character here ^_^ I like it.

Anyways... there are a few typos and such again, but not too bad. I wonder what Heero will do if he recognized Duo as the one who ran into him :) Can't wait till next chapter ^-^.
Please update soon. Keep it up!!!
 Reviewed By: della  On: May 14, 2003 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
well i would have to say that i dont enjoy many crossover fics, but yours is just funny, interesting, a little bit of drama and seems like the chapters, if not the whole story, is well thought out. also, do you have any kind of musical education? because everything your saying here makes since to me, though most who write about it really screw it up. but if you dont have the knowledge, you sure fooled me! the only complaint i have is that you always update when im not here, though u cant help that can you? oh well just keep writing and i will be satisfied and im sure others out there will be too
 Reviewed By: Terrasa  On: May 13, 2003 17:35 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! I love it! Duo is finally going to join the band.... hopefully ^.^ Heero might be a little opposed to it... seeing as Duo ran into him. Lol. Keep up the good workkkk Can't wait for the rest!!!!
 Reviewed By: Nanashi  On: May 13, 2003 09:25 EDT
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I find myself more then willing to wait for the updates because this is a great story line you have here as well as a wonderfully writen story. I love the fic's that hold true to the orignal story or what the futrue may bring our G-boys. But I find myself wanting to read story's where they are just that Boy's! No war or anything I love Orignal thought's and Stroy line's more. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for more.
Oh btw to the reader who missed it you can find out what our China-Man plays if you go back about a chapter or two ::grinz waving:: =-P
 Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2003 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Only Duo could do something like that w/ that kind of flair.
I like how Wufei is portrayed so enthusiatically.
Can't wait to read the first practice together!
 Reviewed By: emi  On: May 12, 2003 20:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
awesome.. i love music...ur story is very well- it flows well and it is very interesting i think that each character's instuments represent them well as well as duo being a dancer... i can see duo as a dancer... those tights mhmm. Heero... wow a guitar great choice the guitar can be played roughly or heavenly... it pertains to Heero so well because eventhough he can be cold and mysterious he can be loving and carefree too.
update ! i need more stories like yours.
 Reviewed By: Ishida Takeru [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2003 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm just trying to figure out what Wufei plays. Maybe I missed it somewhere.
 Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2003 13:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Finally! Duo is with Quatre... so that's Quatre's idea, huh? o_O Duo hasn't eaten anything?!!
I like this chapter. Very musically written ::grins:: I can't believe I'm still like this. I LOVE music, playing it and listening to it. ::sighs:: But was the trumpet guy really THAT bad? Was he embarrassed? I wonder what's going to happen next and such.

Nice chapter! Please keep it up! And Update soon!!!
 Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2003 13:16 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So that's how Duo joins the band!
 Reviewed By: fanni (fannichanchuu@aol.com)  On: April 29, 2003 22:31 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey!! this is great. yet another one of your stories that youve hooked me into. but what does WuFei play?you only say world music? and what do you have aginst trumpet players?i played it for four years!! (even though now im gonna be takin orchestra, always wanted to play cello) not all of us trumpets play blues bad!!
 Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 29, 2003 12:39 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
=) WOW! ::beams:: I know a few things about musical instruments. But I've no idea about the ones in this one... I must have forgotten most stuff when I didn't get any music classes ;_; I don't know much of those other instruments except the recorder -_-'.
It's a good start and everyone is introduced =) GOOD!
Although it's kinda freaky that Dorothy had seen Quatre in the bathroom O_O. Is that true about the bathroom thing?
I wonder what will happen next... so please continue this story ^_^. It's kinda confusing at first, but then again you'll explain some things later, right? There are a few mistakes in your work, but not really big ones. They're just typos and stuff.
Hope to read more soon. And uh... the trompet guy must have been playing horribly o_O.
 Reviewed By: Terrasa  On: April 26, 2003 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah! Duo is the only one that hasn't been introduced to everyone! He's all alone! *sniff* This is really good! I can't wait for the next part! Some of the music stuff is a little confusing though, just cause I don't know 'anything' about instruments and such. But I still love this story! Hope Duo's day gets better and they get to kill that trumpet guy! ^.^
Ja'ne
~Terrasa
 Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 26, 2003 13:46 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
All the characters are being introduced. I can't wait for the next part of the fic!
 Reviewed By: Shadowfax01 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2003 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Man, I love this fic so far! Makes me want to lean towards the music side of my studies...I'm currently taking a double major in music and science...It'll take me an extra year to finish but I'll have two degrees. I really wish that i could get into a school like this one...You seem to know a lot about music. I certainly hit gold when i chose to read this fic! Good job, I'll keep reading if you keep posting!
~ Shadowfax
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