| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: me not logged in On: September 10, 2004 10:54 EDT
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I tried to get into this story, but, it is too dry and boring. Which is disappointing because I have throughly enjoyed some of your other works. Sorry, but this story just isn't that good.
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Title: Contact
Reviewed By: gaijinmononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Despite your rather wacky sense of humor, you manage to keep most of TCBG realistic within the boundries of the IY world (the exception being the Kurama arch, of course). A good example of this is keeping Houjo in the dark concerning Miroku's wind-tunnel. To often in fanfiction Miroku is introduced to outsiders somewhat like: "This is Miroku. If we don't kill Naraku soon he'll die..." (sometimes the wind tunnel is totally forgotten...) Having Houjo unwittingly rub Miroku's uncertain future in his face is dramaticly perfect. That was such a great angst moment that I would have cried if reading your stories didn't always put me in such a good mood... It's also interesting to see a slightly less comical bit of instruction from Mushin (not that I have a problem with the funny stuff... I just have to make sure I don't eat or drink anything while I read.)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 21:42 EDT
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great chapter. cruel hojo. bad very bad hojo. Also loved the uh.. whachamacallits, the Kurama side stories. Are you saying that in one of the stories, Kurama and Sess hook up? I gotta see that. They are both male right? Oh man I gotta see that. Sess would probably kill the author for that. Though if you think it, he may be bi though. I was laughing so hard at where Kuwubara sp said that... oh man. that was priceless. I was gaging for breath I was laughing so hard. cools beans.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 nli On: August 24, 2004 20:44 EDT
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*sigh* This is just an... I dunno. There are no words for this chapter...
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Title: Ooh. . .
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (mm.org doesn't like me?) On: August 24, 2004 19:49 EDT
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I think I'm not all that mature after all. . . I don't understand half of what's said between Miroku and Hojo on certain subjects. . . *Shrug* Other than that, (even including that, really) I love this story! Still! The author's notes are something else, by the way-- so funny, and they're like their own story! *Wonders what Kurama and them are going to do to the ff.net deleting-people. . .*
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Reviewed By: chickenlover2_nli On: August 19, 2004 16:22 EDT
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^-^Time for Hojo to get what's coming to him...YEA! Keep updating, please!
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 20:01 EDT
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yuod better update soon!
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 20:01 EDT
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NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! why must you always end on a freakin cliffhanger?! DAMN you!
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Reviewed By: Kagome14nli On: August 17, 2004 15:19 EDT
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Whoohoo!! Another good Hojo-slap!! You ROCK!!!!! ^.^ Please update soon, Ithilwen-sama...? Plllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeee?
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Reviewed By: akuma_river *not signed in* On: August 17, 2004 00:32 EDT
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Great chapter. I love this story. What is Kagome going to do to him? Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: LDD (Too lazy to sign in) On: August 17, 2004 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent update! I could feel the tension in the scene where Kagome slapped Hojo silly. I never knew the girl had such fighting spirit. And I love the author's notes, being an embittered author who's story was deleted also, I feel your pain. As always, excellent update, and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aha! stupid hojo, he's gonna get whats coming to him. great chapter i love it! please update really soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Clutzoid On: August 13, 2004 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo what do you mean Status:Completed this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please keep going
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Reviewed By: gauntlet challenge On: August 11, 2004 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is such a great story! XD I started reading it a day ago and I finally finished, LOL. I enjoyed it a lot. And the parts with Kurama were hella funny too. ^_^ This is such an awesome story. Extremely original and well done. :D The plots are very interesting. I also find it highly enjoyable that you've written this much and Inuyasha and Kagome still aren't a proper couple. Or anyone else. I think that this is my all time favourite Inuyasha story. ^_^ I can't wait till you update this. Please do... soon. *puppy eyes* I have too many favourite moments to mention them all but my all time favourite part is when Hojo is talking to Sess and being so inadvertantly silly and dumb. ^_^ I laughed so hard then. Just imagining the look on Sess's face. HAHAHAHAHAHA. I also really liked the part where Inuyasha is calling Hojo a Nueteral and puts his foot in his mouth big time. That was sooo funny. XD ROTFLMAO XDXD!!!! You make Hojo very interesting. I haven't read a fic before that had him as well developed as you, and well actually characterised as a person not a plot device or joke(In a bad way). Very refreshing. ^_^ In fact I think all your characterizations are very well done and stick with the so-called 'canon'. Mad props to you one it! Oh and if you wouldn't mind, if it's not a hassle or anything, could you e-mail me and tell me when you have? >.< My e-mail is gauntlet_challenge@hotmail.com Once again mad props on the story. ^_^ GC
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Reviewed By: paxnirvana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I figure since I've devoured all 43 chapters so far [I even have this story on email notice ^_^ ]and enjoyed every one of them that I better send you feedback. I love the characterization you've managed with everyone, but especially Miroku. He's brilliantly handled, insightful and very, very funny. His inner dialogs make me smile every time. Inuyasha and Kagome's interactions are wonderful as well, full of dog-boy's endless macho posturing to cover his soft heart and Kagome's willfull cluelessness. The girl's good and she might love him to pieces, but her 'tude is torture on that poor boy. Not that he should have it easy, but wow... UST. *grin* Shippo is adorable. Go Shippo! Now Hojo, of course, can't go back to the present fast enough for me either. But really, I just wanted you to know someone else (out of the hundreds, it seems) is reading and greatly enjoying your story. Please, please continue!
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