| "5 Princes, 4 Assasins, a General, and a Kip" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Title: MODERATOR NOTE
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 18:47 CDT
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Word of advice: do not ask a MODERATOR to delete a review left by SITE ADMINISTRATION. It's bad form.
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Reviewed By: Allieyjo On: June 10, 2005 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. loved the thing with the medallians and the ending was beautifully written. i was wondering how you were going to have that awesome fight end and i must say the twist with her saving kip was just *tear* loved everything about it, especially the way you developed the relationships. great job and i think heero should have won the fight personally but i liked the way you had it just hte same. it's jsut so sad it's over.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 20:50 CST
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You MUST make a sequel! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 02:01 CST
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(Evile smiles) come on girly girl I know you it will be heero huh? Watch everyone she'll make it Aya just to spite me *S* not but really I think it should be a drwal just to have the story continue with a sequal... I know I know it won't happen but a girl can dream. *LOL*
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I HATE YOU! you made me cry finish this story or I will not give back your anime!
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Title: Administrator, Mediaminer.org
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 14:23 CST
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First off. Leave the site, delete your cookies and clear your internet history then come back in and you should see your current reviews. 2nd you can not ask for reviewer input as to the outcome of the story, this leads to review board abuse which is a bannable violation. I'd hate to see your fictions be removed. Once you have read this please request its removal since it is not a valid review of your story.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 08:53 CST
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0_o Update soon. That was such a awsome chap!
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Title: chap 12
Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 08:33 CST
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AWWWW. I hope Aya and Kudo suvives. It would be sad being that they just confessed their feelings for each other.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 06:24 CST
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Aya's not giong to die is he?
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 15:34 CST
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*snicker* Heero and Aya are some pair. Is it safe to put them both in one room? Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 09:14 CST
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I just started reading this. It is really good. Hope you finish it and not leave it hanging like some people. ^_~ Can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: March 20, 2005 14:05 CST
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i love it!! poor kip! and even though i love ran i think heero would win beacues he started being the perfect soldier longer than aya started becoming an assassin
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Reviewed By: Niere/Duo On: March 19, 2005 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, a hand to hand fight between Heero and Aya. Both are well trained and determined. I think, however, that Heero would win, due to his enhanced strength. It would be a long, fabulous fight,though. Looking forward to reading about it. This story has been great so far! Niere
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: SnakeMIstress On: March 19, 2005 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEERO!!. though that could be biased because i love heero more than aya *grins* defiantly heero. besides. he's the perfect soldier. he's been trained for everything. he's HEERO. he CAN"T loose. its impossible. great chapter bythe way. can't wait for the next one. ja matte ne till then
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 (Not logged in) On: March 05, 2005 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm really enjoying the story's idea, but this chapter just confused the Hell out of me. It seems like everything is moving to quickly and it didn't really flow from the last chapter to this one.
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