| "Last Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kat1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it! Duo is being a little ass, he needs to stay in one stop so that Heero can tell him he loves him! Man, I want you to add more soon. this is too good. |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 20:58 CDT
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You have to continue this! I need to know if this is truly the end for Duo and Heero, and if Duo's gonna die in the end or not. Oh, oh, please hurry this up! ^^ And I love how you have Shingami. I always thought the God of Death would be a lot darker, but, this God of Death is haliriously funny and cute!! ^_^ Oh, do keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Cheers*
Good story, I enjoy this alot. I can't wait to read more! It's freaky how things like having 3 days to confess your love can happen, (can they?! o.O it'd be nice, huh?) Do keep up the good work, and feel free to IM me on AIM at DacesWithFire420. Ja! |
Reviewed By: Kit On: July 01, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was cute. Damn, Heero doesnt have time to sleep, he needs to be working. Well.. maybe a little time to sleep. Aww they are cute. |
Reviewed By: Kit On: June 30, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cruel! that is all I have to say. You are cruel to just it there. I mean, damn that is wrong. you have to update like soon. real soon. That is evil to just stop there. |
Reviewed By: Kerbuddy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bows* this is a great fic! but DAMN THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!! i shall destroy them all with mi amazing ninja skills! Ch'cha! mwhahahah! Next chappy sometime soon plz! ^^; |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 02:45 CDT
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Evil Cliffhanger.... now Heero will be unconscious for a while and loose a lot of time. But Duo has time to cool down and think a little, maybe call Relena and discover that Heero left her. Maybe, maybe not.
When will you update the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 13:24 CDT
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Shinigami has an interesting sense of...irony, perhaps?
Honestly, yeah, awkward for Heero to dump Relena on her birthday, but truly for the best. Not just because time is ticking, but when there is bad news like that, delaying it doesn't make it any easier. It would only make the good memories she'd have had of her birthday a complete lie - which would hurt more in the long run.
Although the domestic missiles she launched at Heero - not only understandable, but kinda funny. I can picture Heero trying to evade them as she hurls them at him in complete rage.
I'm interested in whatever else Duo was arrested for, since Heero had to abruptly end his time on the computer. |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Relena was cool, Heero deserves being hit by a brush. He can be glad, that she didn't had any heavy amunition anymore. lol
Schinigami is a cool character, I guess being as old as Death must be, life gets pretty boring and the moemory of having fun with a lovesick and guilt ridden Perfect soldiers will brighten his life for centuries.
I wonder what the next chapter will bring.
Duo in prision and Heero admitting his love through Ironbars with half a dozen police officers as witnesses?
Or will Heero use explosives and get Duo out of prision "gundam-stile" first?
giggle, well, next chapter.!!!!!Please |
Reviewed By: SilentWillow920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 18:02 CDT
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I hope you're continuing this. I LOVE Duo angst! Please? Pleeeease, Violet? **huge puppy eyes** |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 15:29 CDT
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*pats back* I never realized that you were so sick. Poor violet...
Interesting developments. I'm not sure what I think of this one. Reminds of a movie I saw once. Well kinda... not really... the movie was completly different from your story. Only similar thing was death, devil and a task. *shrugs* Eiother way the story is good. Like I said not sure what I think of this one yet. We shall see my friend, we shall see.
- Storm |
Reviewed By: Airen On: May 06, 2003 21:37 CDT
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AUUUUUUGH!!! ::screams:: Wow, I wasn't expecting any of that to happen either! You just keep pulling out these surprises left and right. Ooh, Shinigami is so cruel -- first showing up looking like Duo, then DROPPING Heero in the WORST situation possible...man, that guy is one tricky bastard.
Awesome chapter as usual. I can't wait to read more! ::bounces happily:: |
Reviewed By: Airen On: May 05, 2003 21:04 CDT
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Aaaaaaaaaauuuuuuughhhhhh! How could that have happened? Poor, poor Duo. I really wasn't expecting that. I must know what happens!
Oh, and happy birthday! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Airen On: May 04, 2003 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gaaaaaahh! Poor Duo-baby! Can't wait to see what happens next... |
Reviewed By: Leth On: May 06, 2003 18:10 CDT
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that's NOT NICE! He diedQ! thats horrible...:( |
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