| "Rivaled Love" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kari-Sama On: May 16, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uwaaa~ Sugoi! This fiction is soooooo kawaii! I like how much detail you put into this.. It's so amazing! Please continue, I cannot wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 06:01 CDT
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Kewlness!! I can't wait till the next chapter!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Silentia On: March 27, 2004 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope i got the rating thing right (10 is the best, isn´t it?) Anyways... I know this review is too late to make you go on writing. I just wanted to let you know that i think your Fic is great. I enjoyed reading it alot. Although i found it sometimes a little bit confusing but thats okay. Well just wanted to say that. A great piece of work! Silentia
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Title: basic begging
Reviewed By: ds On: March 26, 2004 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Concise writing: it gets the point across. Frequently, the punctuation was a little off--more use of exclamations and commas would've given more flow and emotional immediacy to the story, but that's probably just a matter of preferred narrative style. I really enjoy reading this, so I'm hoping for more soon!
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Reviewed By: MononokeČ On: January 03, 2004 08:51 CST
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You and this not updating thing is quite annoying. But I love this fic, and "Of Deamons and Dreams", a great deal, and would love to see some more of them!
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Reviewed By: ShadowRealm45 On: December 06, 2003 13:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! KAWAII-NESS!!! Please! Please update this story is sooooo good!!! Perfect pairing and character personalities!!! More chappys!!!!
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Reviewed By: Leslie On: November 12, 2003 19:11 CST
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I am DEFINITELY loving this fic! This is the first Yami/Yugi/Seto story I have ever read, and I wasn't disappointed! ^___^ I can't wait to see how this story works out!
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Reviewed By: silverdragon_0120 On: August 11, 2003 04:41 CDT
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WHEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon, please!! I love these type of fics!!! Yame/Seto/Yugi fics rock!!!!! literally!!!!!!!!!! Please write lemon!!!!! Please please please pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepppplllllleeeeeeaaaaaassssseeeeeeeee?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Domo arigatou! |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 15:38 CDT
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KAWAII!!! (giggles insanely as Seto glares at her) So kawaii!! More!!! |
Reviewed By: D On: July 07, 2003 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It has a great storyline, and I hope you continue it! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 20:41 CDT
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That was good. I liked it. I hope you post more soon! This is really interesting so far. |
Reviewed By: Mental Mary On: July 04, 2003 00:09 CDT
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This story KICKS ASS! I have one small quetion though,
What does "chibi ichi" mean???? |
Reviewed By: kuso On: July 02, 2003 15:48 CDT
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that was great. I'm usually not a seto/yami/yugi fan ( mostly a yugi/seto or yami/yugi) but that was great. I love the way yugi gets all the attention. keep it up. update soon. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: July 02, 2003 13:57 CDT
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This is a really great story. A little strange, but good all the same! |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Yasha On: July 01, 2003 22:30 CDT
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awww this story is sooo cute! i love it. evil yugi doing that to yami and kaiba that was so cute! eheh please keep writing i love this fic. |
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