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Reviewed By: Kurayami*Ryuu On: November 11, 2003 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I think this fic can be summarized in one word - drool... ^_~
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Reviewed By: autumn(peg) On: November 06, 2003 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How old are you?!? I had an orgazom just reading this! OHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Write alot more and make yuugi come back!
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Reviewed By: Catty-Chan On: October 05, 2003 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!!!!!! update soon!!! u ppls r too slow!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shirren/Sov On: August 04, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD...*DROOL*
(AND WHERE IS CHAPTER 5?!?!?!?!?!?)
POOR Joey, *sniffle*
(Yeah Yami liked feeling Seto's...!)
SOVERENCE!!!O O;;;
My God! They wrote it, they know.
Anyway LOVE the story but wasn't Yugi
s'posed to be on top?
(The man! Shir Get it right!
but yeah how come Yug hasn't made Seto
his bitch yet?)
*hangs head* And SHE'S the sweet one... |
Reviewed By: Spekkio On: July 13, 2003 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Day-amn. That's all I can say right now. @_@
Gyahahahahahahahaha. If anything, I must say that you have done a spectacular job on creating a yaoi fic. A good yaoi fic must do several things. It must not contain horrendous grammar and spelling errors. It must contain a situation that's not stereotypical or too unbelievable. It must have good and likable characters. And......it must be able to turn the reader on. I must say your fic did all of these things for me. I tip my hat to both of you on this spectacular fanfiction. *nod nod*
If it inspires you further, up until now I have avoided all things Yugioh related. (Mostly due to the way Americans have bastardized it). Regardless, you overcame these tarnished boundaries and created a veerrry enjoyable story.
Please write more. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Katie On: July 12, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, I love it. Well written with a nice dose of humor, just how I like them. Now, do me a favor and post the next chapter before the suspense kills me, eh? :P |
Reviewed By: Protector of love between Yami and Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to update this story quickly. |
Reviewed By: DugFinn On: July 04, 2003 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! No! Must continue fic! Oh! What happens?!? Soon! Soon! Finish the next chapter soon! Hee-hee! Wanna see Yugi have his way with Kaiba! |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: July 01, 2003 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finish!FINISH!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LL: Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!! I LOVE this fanfic! I'm like, your biggest fan! You guys are so cool! And go Seto/Yami/Yugi! And Seme!Yugi and Uke!Seto! Hehehehehehehehe...
Seto: You are disgusting...
LL: No I'm not! I just like to see you and Yugi and Yami getting it on!
Seto: ~_~UUU
Yami: *smirk* You know... I really wouldn't mind that...
Yugi: Hehehe... Me neither...
Seto: OO Oh, boy...
Yami: *grabs Seto's left arm*
Yugi: *grabs Seto's right arm*
Both: *drag him into the guest bedroom in LL's house*
LL: ^^U All I can say is... I'm not gonna clean those sheets! And yay for security cameras! I'm gonna go watch my Seto-chan! Ja ne! *walks off*
~LL
P.S.: You guys are the best! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Borath [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 15:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
(applauds) Hell ya that was good! Very original with ow Yami felt it all because Yugi was ramming it into the Puzzle, so more of that please because I was laughing my arse off! update damnit!
Borath ;p |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed lately. I like this story so far. I hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Monoshiri the Mystic Tomato On: June 08, 2003 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yaaaay! Man-porn! *thumbs through the 'Rules of Seme and Uke', and then shrugs and pitches it out the window* Heh, screw the Height Rule...and of course, screw Kaiba. (Taking notes, Yuugi?)
Yuugi: ^____^ Of course.
I'm all for a YamixJou lemon. Although all that's going to do is reinforce my notion that Jou is *everybody*'s bitch. And I can't wait to see how Yuugi's going to get around Kaiba's superior size/strength/reflexes/martial arts training to get him chained to the bed...should be interesting. Hope to see some updates soon! *sets up camp and holds up a little "YuugixSeto" flag* |
Reviewed By: physh On: June 08, 2003 00:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
XD YAY!!!! Yugi-fic! Yugi gets so few good fics. |
Reviewed By: Devilish Angel On: June 06, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10's across the board ya'll. This fanfic is incredible!!!!!!!!! Keep writing, this is one of the SetoXYugi lemons that is great. Yu-Gi is so bad...... Keep it up you guys!!!
DA(Devilish Angel) |
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