| "All's Fair..." Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 08:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Took you long enough...
Cali! Woot woot! Hm... and yet another dinner/dance... |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 08:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
No, no, you can't have Seto. Anyway, somehow she weaseled a deal out of me. I have him Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Saturdays, and she has him Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays. We just had to give him Sunday to work. Soo...no time for you! lol...
Well at least this chapter isn't as much as a cliffhanger as you sometimes insist on writing; so I'm happy. Sort of. Plus I know something no one else does! Well maybe Fox does... I dunno...
So yeah... WRITE MORE! |
Reviewed By: Fox Reed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2003 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blushes* I can't believe your gonna use Julian!!
But...that's okay! Just...be gentle with him. It's his first time out of the box!
Now...on to the fic. I love this start! I'm glad you decided to write a sequel, so you must know that I will be hounding you to keep writing.
BUT!!! Dun stress yourself out over it! Remember, fun first...
Which brings me to another point...Seto needs some R & R.
Blow up Kaiba Corps and have him spend some down time with Mina!!!
*coughs* Or me!! =^-^=
Keep it up sweetie!! You're getting better with every new chapter!! And you are, without a doubt, my favourite Fanfic authoress...ever!! |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2003 16:14 CDT
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Grrr! What's gonna happen to Mokuba?! WHERE IS HE! Gotta find Mokuba, which means YOU'RE writing another chapter. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAAAY! The long awaited sequel! and Cali's in it! Keep going or I'll... I'll....I'll... well, I'll do something to hurt you very badly! I don't know what yet, but... OH, JUST WRITE! |
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 23:26 CDT
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AAAHHHHH!!!! I'm going insane with the mumbo-jumbo! d/a You just have to write more! Plez!!!!! And quick! ^_^0 |
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