| "A Place Within Strangers" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ginia On: July 11, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has been a while since I have come across a V/B set other than in those 'mysterious' three years... Here you have given us a more mature Vegeta and an excellent story. Thank you for what you have written... Is this a good time to start begging for more? Please - there is more - isn't there? |
Reviewed By: sonia (animegurlo217@hotmail.com) On: June 29, 2003 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel i really gotten inside vegeta in this chapter, more than the others. the development its going great. I really hope vegeta find himself insted of resorting to death. im really looking forward to seeing the interaction between him and his children. This story is so beliveable and very powerful. i hope it doesnt fall flat, Im certain it will end with a positive and emotional impact. so far i love your work. |
Reviewed By: Sonia On: June 29, 2003 05:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
i shouldnt of read this chapter while listening to My Immortal by evanescence .. i swear i almost cryed.. its a good story. sort and ansty.. *sigh* keep it up |
Reviewed By: Mystique G. On: June 25, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic is awesome and you write so damn well. I hope you have other stories. The lemons were nice ^_~ and this fic has a very good meaning for love and has an awesome romantic plot, but, it's not too mushy. I hope things will go well and Vegeta will learn that just because she's gone in body doesn't mean that she is completly gone. He has to learn that she would want him to move on even if he doesn't find a spouse, he needs to learn to live for others, and to keep strong for his children and help them live a happy life and to not take all responsibility on himself and to think of others. His kids need him. Especially his daughter. Vegeta has to learn to love in a different way and live for it because love really is worth it. If he isn't happy then neither is Bulma. The story has an amazing lesson to it and it amkes you think--makes you beleive. It gives you a new perspective and is a great joy to read. It has a great dramatic plot and you make your readers feel really deep. You write it with so much style and maturity. I hope you continue and have a nice ending. Please don't let Vegeta kill himself or something. He stills has a responsibility and I hope that he'll learn to love his children even without Bulma's body there. A bond lasts forever. even in death, but I hope once he finds that out that that's when Kami will bring Bulma completely back. |
Reviewed By: Mystique G. On: June 25, 2003 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic is awesome and you write so damn well. I hope you have other stories. The lemons were nice ^_~ and this fic has a very good meaning for love and has an awesome romantic plot, but, it's not too mushy. I hope things will go well and Vegeta will learn that just because she's gone in body doesn't mean that she is completly gone. He has to learn that she would want him to move on even if he doesn't find a spouse, he needs to learn to live for others, and to keep strong for his children and help them live a happy life and to not take all responsibility on himself and to think of others. His kids need him. Especially his daughter. Vegeta has to learn to love in a different way and live for it because love really is worth it. If he isn't happy then neither is Bulma. The story has an amazing lesson to it and it amkes you think--makes you beleive. It gives you a new perspective and is a great joy to read. It has a great dramatic plot and you make your readers feel really deep. You write it with so much style and maturity. I hope you continue and have a nice ending. Please don't let Vegeta kill himself or something. He stills has a responsibility and I hope that he'll learn to love his children even without Bulma's body there. A bond lasts forever. even in death, but I hope once he finds that out that that's when Kami will bring Bulma completely back. |
Reviewed By: vejitalover On: June 25, 2003 08:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love seeing Vegeta so angsty. Can't wait for the next installment. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHATTTTTTT NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! *SOBS* NO WAYY!!! THIS SUCKKK!!! WHY WHYWHYYY!!!!! *pound my fist into the desk*
UPPDATEEEEEEE! CAUSE I'll DIE MY POORRR BABYYYY VEGETA!!!
LATER *SNIIFFFF* |
Reviewed By: animegurlo217@hotmail.com (sonia) On: June 17, 2003 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cry*... This fanfic actually moved me to tears. I cant get enough of your writing! The characters, the story, and the development are all excellent! Your vision of the birth of bra is unique and entertaining. Its a beautiful fanfic. I cant wait to see how this how this story turns out. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 18:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very very Cute !!! Finnaly lil bra is born!!!! Shes so cute!! Gods its unberable !! I love her!!!! Cant wait for DBGT! I wanna see the interaction with Vegeta.
UPDATE SOONNNN!!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 19:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
MMMM!!! I loved this chapy!! The lemon WAS OOOOOFF THE HHHHHOOOKKK! Very very well done I need a shower damn U! (LOL) GOKU U ASS!!!!! CAN U SEE THEY R FUCKING FUUUCKKKOOFFFF! by the way great response from Vege.
Continue Please Update soon!
LATE!R |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you continued it. Can't wait for Part 2 to come out... |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 28, 2003 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT WORK!!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA On: May 24, 2003 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
THANK KAMI U UPDATED I LOVED THIS CHAPYYYYYY *HUGS* The lemon was so YUMMM and sweet.
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOOONNNN!!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Onna On: May 24, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good!! I hope you post the next chapter soon...^^ |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu On: May 21, 2003 04:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey
I don't get why its rated nc-17 to tell you the truth. Can you e-mail me and tell me. Zerianyu@yahoo.com Il oved the story it was awsome and there was depth, but I don't think Vegeta would have done that to Bulma. But everyone ones sees characters diffrent. I wish there was more. |
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