| "Blue Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 04:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...AWESOME story! I absolutely loved it! You're writing style is fantastic! I hope you are going to continue... |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUAL! =D Me loves it! W00T! |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2003 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am throughly impressed. A rather bittersweet look at the YxY relationship.
My only issue is that I wish you had expanded more on Jou issue with Yami. I like Jou and I can understand his concern, I just don't think it was defined well enough.
However I enjoyed the YxY moments as well as Grampa's take on the situation.
Icz |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2003 21:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Wow
LD: Yeah
Karen: That was simply incredible. Very strong and emotional
LD: Very angsty and kinda depressing until the end Why did you have to go and make it sappy * pouts *
Karen: Very lovely! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 18:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWWW! Kawaii! I want to see some action here, not just the kissing (although that was a pretty intense kissing scene, bravo!) I love this story so far, so keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great! Is there going to be more is this it? I think it could go either way. I love the way you wrote this! Great job! |
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