| "Blue Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 12:02 CDT
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asmoe fanfic ocean, I just love your works. I would have read it sooner, but I just didn't have the time. I don't have as much time as I used too now adays but keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 13:05 CDT
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That was a great chapter! Very dramatic! I'm glad you got yourself out of the corner you'd backed yourself into. Please post the last chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: yogishebear On: July 08, 2003 16:15 CDT
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ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooO.O! update soon please I am so interested in what is going to happen. Is yami going to be possed and try and kill yugi? well I hope the next chappie is up soon. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 18:44 CDT
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Wow! That was a great chapter! What was the drug that the guy and his girl were on and that he gave to Yami? I hope you post more soon! I really want to see how Yuugi handles Yami and what happens next! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: July 06, 2003 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! You cannot stop there!!! PLEASE noooo! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Onegai?!?! Pwease...! Pretty PLEASE! ^_______^ ARIGATO! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! ^________________^ Oyasumi Nasai!
Yami & Yuugi 4 Ever & Ever!! |
Reviewed By: Catsy & Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was good!!! how do ya' come up with this stuff. anyways continue and keep up the good work, laterz. |
Reviewed By: ShadowSpecter On: July 04, 2003 19:06 CDT
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what happened to chapter four?! o_O |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 11:05 CDT
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I'm glad you posted another chapter, there is just one problem. It doesn't show up. It has the disclaimer and the title saying it's chapter 4 but no story. Maybe you could try uploading it again? |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 09:46 CDT
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Hey Ocean, I don't know if its te same for you, but I am having trouble reading the chapter you just submitted. My computer is telling me all sorts of things, like there should be a missing chapter two and it skips to chapter 3 and there isn't anything, except your disclaimer, the leters A/N the title of the fic, and a chapter title and the words chapter four. Then it gies me the links found at the end of the fanfic. Its not like I am tryin o bash it, Iam jst asking aquestion. I really like your work an everything. I really do |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 04:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...AWESOME story! I absolutely loved it! You're writing style is fantastic! I hope you are going to continue... |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUAL! =D Me loves it! W00T! |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2003 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am throughly impressed. A rather bittersweet look at the YxY relationship.
My only issue is that I wish you had expanded more on Jou issue with Yami. I like Jou and I can understand his concern, I just don't think it was defined well enough.
However I enjoyed the YxY moments as well as Grampa's take on the situation.
Icz |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2003 21:57 CDT
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Karen: Wow
LD: Yeah
Karen: That was simply incredible. Very strong and emotional
LD: Very angsty and kinda depressing until the end Why did you have to go and make it sappy * pouts *
Karen: Very lovely! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 18:21 CDT
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AWWW! Kawaii! I want to see some action here, not just the kissing (although that was a pretty intense kissing scene, bravo!) I love this story so far, so keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 18:58 CDT
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This is great! Is there going to be more is this it? I think it could go either way. I love the way you wrote this! Great job! |
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