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| "The truest love of all" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Cool On: May 26, 2003 08:12 CDT
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Even though this story you wrote is good but try to write something more romantic & very nic story,keep it up. | Reviewed By: StoryReader On: May 26, 2003 06:41 CDT
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I would like you write romance of humans which it will be more romantic, Thank You. | Reviewed By: Undercover Ham-Ham Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice to say the least, but try to lead in more with a plot, don't feel a need to rush romance, let it bloom like a rose does in the morning sun, opening itself to the world around it, caressed by the rays of the sun, basked in the warmth that comes with the dawn of a new day....(you aren't the only one who can write romance) Very nice, you do have talent, don't lose sight of it. I bet someday love will reach you and never want to let go. Someone will be impressed by the way you do romance, for a challange, try and see who Pashmina would be happiest with. | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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