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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 05:45 CDT
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Ack, while reading the scene with Ran and that ugly guy I felt shivers ran down my spine. *smiles*...there ^.~ ~Ko-chan~
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Title: Borderline
Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 08:34 CDT
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I love this fanfic. You put so much detail into your writing making it feel like I am really in it. I love this mystery. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: June 17, 2004 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. Kudos to you for your creativity. I was very excited when I got an email that you had updated. I immediately had to read it. Keep up the good work. :0)
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 12:21 CDT
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 12:19 CDT
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And again...*smile*...damn, couldn't suppress the smile creeping onto my face again when I got the mail that you posted a new chap ^_____^...not that I'd want to suppress it anyways *grin* ^.^ I so knew it *sobs* poor Rannie, oh my...Schuldig and Yohji are sooo going to "pay" when Crawford finds that out
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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 12:02 CDT
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Oh my god please dont' take too long with the next part!!! I can't wait. I need to know what happens. It's finally all coming together.
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Title: Such a good scapegoat
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 01:59 CDT
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Ken needs a swoft kick to the ass is all I think. Than again, I also think blunt head trauma is the cure for everything. My advice is not good to take. Back to the fic: ooooh Yohji and Schu were irresponsible! Ooooh, I'm gunna tell! And wow, if I were Ran in that situation...man, I'd be pissing myself scared! Good job with the making of the scary situation ^_^
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Title: Mmm fic
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: May 21, 2004 14:47 CDT
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No worries on the updating and all. A good story takes time and effort. Anyway, psychological ANYthing is especially difficult. And now for an editorial: Ken you bastard! Can't wait to see what accident's in store for Schu (btw, need more S/Y sex in this fic, it's lacking ~_^) and what's gunna happen to Ran. Bad Ken, bad! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 10:10 CDT
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*Heh* of course I review every chapter^^...it's rare that I don't when I like a story really much, the exceptions would be if I'm not able to review. Hhm, but sometimes it's hard for me to review because I have the feeling that I say just the same as before and that feeling I don't like, weird, eh^^;;;. Lovely chapter again...moouuu, Ken was not nice! Oh and about the threesome...*ehehe* it's ok *lol* it was just a thought/agreement^^ of a really addicted WK Fangirl^^;. Do what you like or what you are able to *grins embarrassed*. Your story is a good one and will ever be to me ^.^...no matter which pairing (Brad x Ken; Brad x Ran) you'll choose at the end ^__^! Ja *bows* Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: kato_chan On: April 05, 2004 15:34 CDT
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He kissed him!!!!
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Reviewed By: jenna^ On: April 03, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*scratches head* I have always wondered if I should read this fic, ever since you posted the first chapter. Well, I did now. I have to say that there are some cliches, but overall it is entertaining to read. Hope you will post next part soon.
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Title: ah the lottery
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: April 02, 2004 11:52 CST
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Damn you lottery for not letting fan-fic writers just be able to write! Lovely chapter. Aya is being incredibly mega-doom-bitch like. I'm terribly amused by this. I kept thinking, 'If I were in her position, would I be reacting this way?' I honestly can't say how I'd react, but this means your fic rocks, cause it makes me question how I'd be in the character's places. Woo!! ^__^ Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 04:51 CST
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*Heh*...smile I did ^_^! Hhmmm beautiful chapter! Don't like Aya(-chan)^^ *growls*. *gg* concerning the Brad embracing/kissing? Ran scene^^..he kissed him, that's what I think and believe ^________^, end of discussion ^_~. Oh and by the way, I totally agree with Jaded08....B/R/K would be the best solution^^;...we'll see, ne. Ja Ja^^ *huggles* Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: Jaded08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 12:13 CST
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Chapter 10 was great! I feel so sorry for Ken though. Why not make this a Brad/Ran/Ken fic, that way no one gets left out! ^_^
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Title: No problemo
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: February 26, 2004 20:40 CST
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Hey, writing well takes time, we have no issues with writers taking their time to make sure that their muses are working well. Hmmm, refering to myself in the third person am i? Oh well. So, this is a good part, very cool. Do keep up the goodness that is your writing ^_^ I hope for your muses to be in tip-top shape so that you have no blocks or trouble writing the next part.
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