| "Bottled Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: InvisibleRain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic... it became just as real to me as watching the series on screen! That was incredible... The flow was perfect, the timing of each characters entrance, the death of Naraku.. now I'm wondering too what those flesh thingies were.. hm.. You've totally taken a disney-destroyed tale and made it your own... and beyond that. I can't wait for your next chapter! Too bad its the last :(
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Reviewed By: Angel_BlueFlame On: September 27, 2003 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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omfg.... You're an awesome writer. You're new chapter made me cry...TWICE! omg. It was great. Keep up the good work! ^_~ L8r, Angel
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Reviewed By: ME On: September 27, 2003 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawww...make me want to cry!!! yes, I'll be sad too when this fic ends---loved every minute of reading it!!! can't wait to see how you get the two back together ('cause I KNOW this WILL happen^_^...you couldn't possibly disappoint me now.....could you???...nah!) hey, I'm all up for two more chapters--anything to prolong the inevitable--I want to say 'update soon', but then that'll mean the end will be coming that much sooner---but ....I can't wait either!!!
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Title: ACK!!! *sob*
Reviewed By: Pkat On: September 26, 2003 09:17 CDT
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I REALLY hope the ending to this is happier than that last chapter... I am a sneaky person who reads fanfics while at work, that last chapter was so sad.. I started crying at my desk.. YOU EVIL FANFIC WRITER!!! :P Heh... just kidding, it's great!!!! Even though it was sad, it was a really good chapter, and it was necessary.. *sobs*
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 03:00 CDT
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I have to admit at the begining I was calling InuYasha a baka but....That was the sweetest thing I ever read. Darn it. I been trying to crack this mystery but I guess I'll just wait for you to tell me. For a moment I thought Shippo was going to say that they have to ask him for a wish. Or at least how they could aquire one from him to make a happy ending. Oh, well. The end already? I know that I'll have to re-read it all again. So don't be suprised if you get two reviews from me.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 21:07 CDT
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*busts out the tissues* SOB! SO SAD! SO ROMANTIC. youve piqued my interest. i love this story.
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Title: Crying
Reviewed By: Kiri no Hime (sorry , too lazy to log in) On: September 25, 2003 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... you're wonderful , you know it ? Are you only aware it ? I LOVE YOU !! Me too , I'm so sad that the story is going to end soon ... But, really , it was worth it ! ^^ And Please !! make an epilogue !!! I always loved it !! Epilogue are great !! Seeing what ppl became a while after... Please, go on !! ^^ U know, BG is really my favourite story... Of all the story you've ever writen, this one is my favourite... well, I loved 28 days too... (loved the ending ^^)But BG was definitly my favourite... aaaaw, can't believe, it'll be soon over ... *crying her eyes out*... but well, I'll keep on watching you through Autumn Bane ^^ I love your stories, your writing style , everything... So , good luck with your studies , and keep on entertaining us ;p Thanks again !! Kirisame
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Title: Note to Self
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 12:18 CDT
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Oooooh, so there is a way, and Inuyasha figured it out. Too late. Too bad. "Ask and ye shall recieve," huh? Indeed. For some reason, I thought that this WAS the last chapter. Even if you're going for tragic, this would have been a crummy place to stop, everything's unfinished except for Naraku. Oh, and Inuyasha's a jerk for knocking her out for six hours.
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 25, 2003 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible, wonderful and all the other synonyms that apply ;) I have been following your fic for quite a while now and have thoroughly enjoyed it. I have busted out laughing, wanted to throttle characters and having read this latest chapter have had tears in my eyes. While I am looking forward to seeing how you will tie this all up, I am also dreading it as it means that it will of course be over with, sort of the same feeling I have for the original InuYasha series *sigh* a contradiction in emotions eh? Anyway enough of that sort of babbling, I just really wanted to commend you on creating such a great fanfic, you have a wonderful talent in entrapping the reader, don't let that talent go to waste! Best wishes
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: Muse-chan On: September 24, 2003 14:55 CDT
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I mean I can't tell what the title is just yet. (I do have a title) Lol.
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Reviewed By: Muse-chan On: September 24, 2003 14:53 CDT
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I am so glad that you updated now. And Shippo is the first! Or seemingly acknowledge as the first. I don't know. I feel sad for Inu and Kag, because of his punishment. This is such a good fic. This is one of the few fics I would be glad to be patient for, because it is worth the wait. Please continue. Oh. I have a story coming out pretty soon, I hope you'll take a look at it when it's out. It'll be and Inuyasha fic, but I can't tell you just yet because you'll be able to see it when it's posted. That's all 4 now. Ganbat te ne. (Good luck.)
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 02:28 CDT
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You are aware you said that 70% of people have good lives and 40% of people don't aren't you? Anyway, great chappy! Update now or I'll have to start threatening you. ... I suppose that is a threat right there, but Oh Well!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 11:54 CDT
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interesting touch making shippo the wise ass first, hope the rest is this good |
Title: Ch. 25
Reviewed By: Ithilwen (darn thing won't let me login effectively) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 11:49 CDT
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I figured it was Shippo while reading your intro to this chapter. No bragging rights for that, I suppose.
And Kag doesn't use a retroactive wish, either. Man, my Jedi mind tricks must be picking up static.
Here's my next one: Kagome doesn't use that wish. Significance thereto. |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 08:12 CDT
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something in me told me it was shippo lol. well i was so excited when i saw that you'd posted another chapter! i love your stories! you did a great job on this chapter. i cant believe inu is gonna b on probation!!! o poor kagome! cant wait till the next chapter is out =) |
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