| "Bottled Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 11:54 CDT
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interesting touch making shippo the wise ass first, hope the rest is this good |
Title: Ch. 25
Reviewed By: Ithilwen (darn thing won't let me login effectively) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 11:49 CDT
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I figured it was Shippo while reading your intro to this chapter. No bragging rights for that, I suppose.
And Kag doesn't use a retroactive wish, either. Man, my Jedi mind tricks must be picking up static.
Here's my next one: Kagome doesn't use that wish. Significance thereto. |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 08:12 CDT
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something in me told me it was shippo lol. well i was so excited when i saw that you'd posted another chapter! i love your stories! you did a great job on this chapter. i cant believe inu is gonna b on probation!!! o poor kagome! cant wait till the next chapter is out =) |
Title: Super!
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 06:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I spent 3 days reading your story because I'm not good at english and I can't stand staring at the monitor all day. I think your fic is really interesting.
Please Update soon!!!! |
Title: whats going on?!
Reviewed By: koinu-chan On: September 15, 2003 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um... i was wondering what's up exactly... i know you have school and every thing but you said that you'd still write occasionally, but the fic says status complete.... what the f***! i wanna know if its a happy ending or not!!!!
ok, i feel better now, ja!
ps-- i still wanna know |
Reviewed By: demon23 On: September 14, 2003 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i keep coming back a forth to see did you write anymore chapters for this story, THIS STORY ROCKS, please write more |
Title: Three Cheers
Reviewed By: Megami no Akari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit I passed by your fanfic a couple of times before actually reading it. (Shame on me...) I had no idea what I was missing.
Your work is creative and vivid. I found myself laughing outloud quite a few times. ^_^. I hope you get the chance to update soon because I ran out of story to read and am inciting a riot until I see an update >_ |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 15:32 CDT
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Okay I know this is like someone bursting in to a theater when the movie hits the climax but, I wish I had been on board when you started this story. It took me almost 48 hours of reading time to catch up, but it was sooo good! I was up at 4:47 AM when I finish. (Keep in mind I had a class at 9 and I was going to go to breakfast at 8.) But it was so worth it. My mind was bursting with comments as I read. I found myself in the "face in hand" pose uttering responses to some of InuYasha's retorts. Only to find that Kagome had used the same choice words I just said. (Freaky) The "First" is going to be Myoga. It has to be. After Miroku compared all the wishbringers to fleas. The irony would be to funny! speaking of funny, Miroku slapping him self..hilarious! And I think InuYasha should tell Kagome why Miroku is slapping himself. Of course, he might get slapped again by her if she knew why. (Awww..He is looking out for his "father" after all) I'm still trying to figure out the loop hole in this mess but I am totally clueless. Rozefire do me this one favor. Never stop writing. Your work never sezies to amaze me. You always manage to shatter the expectations that I have set for your writing and take it to new heights. One of these days I am going to print out your stories so I can read them over and over. Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: unknown123 On: September 05, 2003 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I BETTER NOT FIND OUT THE FIRST IS MICHAEL JACKSON, nice story by the way its the greatest story i ever read |
Title: Visitor
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 12:15 CDT
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... Didn't Miroku already tell Inuyasha why he was slapping himself?
Even Buyo is gone? Oooh... (sneefe!) Really shows how much Kagome is lost. The shrine's repossessed, her dad's gone, AND he took the cat.
"I'll never be clean again!" Hee! That whole moment is just perfect. A good take on Souta from beginning to end.
Empty paint can?! BWAAaAAAAhehahahheheheeeeehaha!
So who exactly has to die to free the Wishbringer? The WB itself? Inuyasha's had masters die on him before, but I don't think any of them had that in mind.
I really like the contrast between Inuyasha's captivity as a Wishbringer with his previous life. There was nothing to like, and nothing to miss, except some vague feeling of freedom that he never had a use for until long after he'd lost it.
I still think Kagome's going to make a retroactive wish.
I wonder what the first will look like. We've already covered Naraku, Sango, Miroku, Kohaku, Kikyo... Maybe the First can change its shape and look like someone different to each person.
I seem to remember Botan's entrance into Yu Yu Hakusho. I gathered that the whole pretty-girl ensemble was to keep people from running away. |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story, please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Kiri no Hime (sorry , too lazy to log in) On: September 03, 2003 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey , cliffy here ...
>.<
But I'm still in love with your work ^^
*hopeless*
Kirisame |
Reviewed By: Neko Kagome On: August 31, 2003 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lurved it! This is a really good fan fic! :D |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 08:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I notice that Miroku keeps shifting from "she" to "he" and back when referring to the First.
Awwww....!
Sango is so much fun... So Miroku thinks it's possible to get them out of this mess without ending up dead or wished. Hm. And here I thought Kagome was going to have to use that last one to justify Inuyasha's actions.
I wonder... The reason that Inuyasha's master can't wish Inuyasha free is because the make-him-a-WB wish was granted by a ninth and Inuyasha's only a tenth, no? I wonder... |
Reviewed By: Muse-chan On: August 24, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Actually I've been reading this fic, but never actually got a chance to review. Now I actually have that chance. I just wanted to say that this is a really clever fic. It's not fast pace when it comes to romance, and to be frankly honest... I actually don't like it,when the characters get a little tooromantic a little too fast. (I have no idea why my space-bar is acting like a delete button, but it's starting to irritate me.)It
seems... Unreal. *sigh* maybe that's just me, but anyways the story is progressing really nicely. This story, along with a few others are my favorites because they arenot rushed,and I believe the authors actually care if their readers can understand it. So to make it short, it's well thought out and not rushed. Whoo, I just wanted to tell you, and can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I'm really curious to know what the 'First Wishbringer' will be like. Cya~good luck. P.S. Ignore any words that are connected and should not be.my computer is acting funny. It just won't space right. |
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