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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it. it's a interesting twist. |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: May 29, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update this story is really good.you have a nice beginning and all so you should keep this story going. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 14:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hm... An interesting show. Inuyasha doesn't seem to get the "artificial strength" that humans often use. (He could overpower Kag easily; she's made strong by her position.) ...but then, maybe he does; he doesn't break out of the cuffs until an emergency.
So Sango diffused the bomb? It's unclear.
I like the "few demon children" idea. Makes sense considering their longevity.
I know it's just a transliteration, but the usual way to spell it is "Miroku."
Almost all the political and social pressures you describe make enough sense to justify. ...but the hyperchristian, Lei; would she think that demons of this kind threw a wrench into Biblical explanations, or would she think that they were rather actual demons, as in hellspawn? |
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