| "Helping Hands" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Title: Ooooooooooo
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 11:07 CDT
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Please write more! I don't think that I've reviewed this story before, but I've read it many times and I do love it to death, so please do finish it!! I do have one thing to say. WHERE THE HELL DID BENJAMIN COME FROM!!! That kinda shocked the hell out of me, but it was a nice twist and I cannot wait for you to update!! Please write again soon, I'm absolutely dying to know what is going to happen to Trow and Quatre when they find out ghosts do exist. Also I do have a question. Are they going to get together? That would be too cute. I hope they do, I love that pairing!
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Reviewed By: Slice On: July 27, 2004 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. Asolutely wonderful. Lurve'm this story. Mmm, but this little spot requires a bit of explaining. I can't wait for the next chapter. Because I wantsum explanation. Rar. *intimidate* Sorry about your beta kinda going bye-bye. If it makes you feel better, we love this story and hope you finish it soon so we can read the rest of it. Oh, and you've done a great job inserting original characters and an AU storyline with the GW boys. In fact, this is probably the best job I've ever seen anybody do on it. Most people just can't pull that off, and the story is crap because of it, so mega-props to you. You're maybe the third author whose fanfiction I've read with the ability to do that and the knack to make the story real. Well...sorry for blathering on and on. It's three in the morning, and my brain is running around in circles. I'm gonna go find more stuff to read. /Slice\
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Reviewed By: daughterofdeath On: July 27, 2004 00:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
add a new chapter
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Reviewed By: ChiisaiAngel On: July 26, 2004 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best focs I have ever read. No lie. And the ending to the last chapter is INTRIGUING!!! *gets down on knees and begs* Please, please, PLEASE continue!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lia4 On: July 26, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gracias, muchas gracias Thanks to update, you have a very happy woman to me. Although he expect 9 months I am content, I leave the chapter intrigued, I expect with desires the next. I hope to read you again ( nine months noooooooooo ) Lia
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Reviewed By: hatorinaoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 01:42 CDT
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please please please continue this story. i have been waiting for this story to update for quite a while. i really like this story. it's really good. hope you update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lia4 On: February 15, 2004 13:39 CST
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Hello My original language is the Spanish, but I mean that I have liked much your Fics and wait for with anxieties the continuation. This I translated, excuses it the grammar errors. Desire that you responded to my mail apal_x@yahoo.es to me. Lia
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Reviewed By: Garnetfirefly On: September 25, 2003 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, yes, i love this story. katherine is so cool! and yes, she does remind of Duo. alot. i cant wait for you to update, and i sooo wish that mediaminer offered a favorites list to members. *pout* oh well. i'll write down the name so i can find it again. kudos! Melissa
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Reviewed By: Immrotal_hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME LIKES ME LIKES!! I love ur plot! |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 21:52 CDT
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ohhhhhh, sorry I haven't reveiwed in a while but I love this story, she is a naughty ghost, can't wait till the next chapter is out. |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2003 02:05 CDT
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Yay!! Happy fun time chapter of finally-getting-together-ness!!!! You make me smile soooo much! Now all that's left is finding a way to free Katherine's spirit so she can rest in peace, and all will be splenderific! Woo!!!!! *does happy dance of joy* |
Reviewed By: BattousaiKoi On: August 13, 2003 01:56 CDT
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I like I like I LIKE!! Very yummy lemon ^_~ I'd love it if there were a couple more like it before the end of this fic (or better yet make 'em longer -^_^-) But of course the lemon isn't the only reason I've kept readin this, I love your writing style. That said, there's only one last thing I can think of to say: YAH KATHERINE *claps hyperly* (hehehe, I think I may have just made up a word ^^) Good job on gettin those two together, they can be pretty stuborn ^_~ Hehehe, anyways... had to get that out -^_^-, Keep up the great writing and the yummy lemons, love ya ^.^ |
Reviewed By: starcrest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cute idea, but a little - no - too OOC for me. |
Reviewed By: starcrest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Oi" literally means "hey" in Japanese, and "koibito" means "sweetheart". But you pretty much got everything else right, I'm sure. (*feels shameful*) Okay, now to actually read the fic... |
Reviewed By: Eve On: July 31, 2003 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE MORE MORE!!!! pretty pretty plz with a naked Duo on top OOPS!! *smacks self in the 4head* cherry the expression is CHERRY on top. sry i get that a lil mixed up sutimes *nervous chuckle* but well ok down 2biznez: the fic, it, well, 4a lack of better wording, it.....TOTALLY ROCKED!!!!!!!!! i luved it luved it luved it!!!! plz plzplzplzplzplz write more! *pulls out 'mega butt kissing lip gloss' and aplies* o-great-wonderful-pretty-pretty-and-talented author i luved ur fic it *ahem* ROCKED MY WORLD lol (alwayz wanted ta say that) well ok things i liked...well c i dont think i can complain about anything really....*looks thoughtful thn in pain and grabs icepack b4 brain overheats* ahh much better *steam billowing from ears* im getting off toppic ne? well i was jus wondering...can u maybe like ...... WRITE MORE!!! *giggles*
peace V^_^ and luv
~fanchick~
Eve
ps if u like wanna mail me i dunno im new 2the whole reveiwing thing so i figured if u had a reply im badmonkynotreat@yahoo.com thnx o talented 1!! |
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