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Reviewed By: BlackRain88 fr:fanfic.net On: September 17, 2005 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. Now there's two ghosts, yay! Will they ever meet?
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Reviewed By: Lady Frisselle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I love the characterizations and how you got Duo and Heero together. I really hope that you will continue with this story. If not having a beta is all that is holding you back let me know and I'll do it. I want to know what Benjamin is going to say to Quatre and Trowa, if they find the journal and stuff and I can't if you don't finish.
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Reviewed By: Sayo-chan On: January 14, 2005 17:09 CST
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I really like your story, though i was upset to notice that it hasnt been updated since July 2004 and it is now January 2005. I hope you can update soon! Its coming along very nicely and i dont want to see such a good story go to waste. Good luck in further writing!
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Reviewed By: Baya On: October 17, 2004 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, This fiction seems familiar to me...I believe I had read the first few chapters a long time ago, and just recently found the story again. I could have sworn it was finished. That's the only reason I didn't give a 10 for creativity. Other than that, the story was amazing, keeping me in suspense and laughing out loud all the time. I wish to offer my services as a beta reader if you like. I know you don't know me and that's grounds enough to say no so I don't mind, but if you find the need, I am an english major. My e-mail is arwendesdemona@hotmail.com, just in case.
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Reviewed By: aynia On: September 24, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
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Reviewed By: lovely sakura On: August 10, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story and I cant wait for the next part! Hurry please, I cant wait to find out what happens next!!!
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Title: Iie!... I know...why doesn't she shut up *sigh* just alittle more
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 05:55 CDT
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could target Duo, even though it seems that the spirits can't interact much more physically than through dreams but angry, hateful spirits have been known to do awful things... *remembers that the people Quat hired fled, qirks brow* umm I 'nuf said, eh? I love good ghost stories especial when there's mystery involved and even more so with the g-boys in it. So I can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 05:49 CDT
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*screams* I left a rather brief comment at ff.net but ya get the lengthy version here (^_^)... Oi please continue this story. The moment you said the ghost I pretty much guessed that it wasn't Katherine, we know her now and I highly doubt that you'd refer to her with such an impersonal reference *qirks brow* And ya know I can't wait to read more!! Is this really going to be 2x1 fic? can't they just love each other and positions, *coughs hentai* I know, can switch up between the two?? Considering Duo's history in this fic, even though he learned to please himself while performing his job it would be nice that with Heero he has better...umm...bodily memory of Heero making love to him in thath way?!? *flag waving 2x1x2* And Oi! Since Quat picked up all the negativity in the house, perhaps Ben and Kat aren't the only ones there... but Kat's murderer too. And if that is the case then that would explain why Ben didn't reunit with Kat and Ben some how is being kept separated from her. Oi, I'm talking alot and ya know what here's a little more *Gomen* Earlier I remember that before Kat sensed the strong emotions from Duo she was stuch reliving her death, so it is possible that Ben was kept separate from her by time factor of when/how much later than Kat he died? This is getting good I hope that this won't actually be over in a few more chapters?! 'Cuz as Kat realized and the narrator pointed out- Heero's like Ben and Duo's like Kat so it's possible that the murdering spirit... |
Title: Student writer
Reviewed By: Griffen On: July 29, 2004 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story not the most original but still one of the best. I hope that you will update this story eventuly. It would be such a same to end it right on a cliff hanger and betwen two parts
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Reviewed By: Ama-chan On: July 28, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fanfic so please dont stop writing it. my punctuation mite not be great in the review but if you wwant, i'll be your beta reader. anyways, i really like that benjamin is now gettin involved. i certainly didnt see that coming ^^ well ciao for now ^^ good luck writing o yea... my email is jefpeace@comcast.net if you wanna talk ^^ ta ~Ama
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this story rocks! I can't wait for the next chapter, hope it comes out pretty soon. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Good chapter
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello I was really happy to find your story here because I read it some where els. Here you have 2 chapters more then I read till not. I love your story it is very good. I hope you will add new chapters soon. Good work
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Title: Ooooooooooo
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 11:07 CDT
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Please write more! I don't think that I've reviewed this story before, but I've read it many times and I do love it to death, so please do finish it!! I do have one thing to say. WHERE THE HELL DID BENJAMIN COME FROM!!! That kinda shocked the hell out of me, but it was a nice twist and I cannot wait for you to update!! Please write again soon, I'm absolutely dying to know what is going to happen to Trow and Quatre when they find out ghosts do exist. Also I do have a question. Are they going to get together? That would be too cute. I hope they do, I love that pairing!
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Reviewed By: Slice On: July 27, 2004 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. Asolutely wonderful. Lurve'm this story. Mmm, but this little spot requires a bit of explaining. I can't wait for the next chapter. Because I wantsum explanation. Rar. *intimidate* Sorry about your beta kinda going bye-bye. If it makes you feel better, we love this story and hope you finish it soon so we can read the rest of it. Oh, and you've done a great job inserting original characters and an AU storyline with the GW boys. In fact, this is probably the best job I've ever seen anybody do on it. Most people just can't pull that off, and the story is crap because of it, so mega-props to you. You're maybe the third author whose fanfiction I've read with the ability to do that and the knack to make the story real. Well...sorry for blathering on and on. It's three in the morning, and my brain is running around in circles. I'm gonna go find more stuff to read. /Slice\
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Reviewed By: daughterofdeath On: July 27, 2004 00:08 CDT
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add a new chapter
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