| "Bittersweet Victory" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cruel_Angel On: November 29, 2003 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic! please continue soon^o^
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 11:24 CST
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omg! im gonna cry! im so happy youve finally updated i wrote a review so long ago and have been waiting patiently ::looks below at the name ashley:: yay! im gonna read right away! arigatou!
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Reviewed By: Amunra On: October 30, 2003 08:43 CST
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Wow... this is an amazing story. Your writing style is excellent, and you definitely get the reader engrossed in the story. The plot is very unique, and I can't wait to see what happens. Seto and Yami are always a good couple, but better when there's tension and conflict between them, as is the case here. I had never thought of pairing Mokuba and Yugi, but I have to admit that I like the pairing. Great job, and I hope to see more story soon!
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Reviewed By: Angel_soul03 On: October 10, 2003 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This had to be the best chapter yet!!!!!!! It was sooooooooo sweet! and you left it at a cliffhanger!!! Me want more!
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Title: Yay! It's back!
Reviewed By: Animom [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 12:26 CDT
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This was the very first YGO lemon I ever read. I was sad when it went away, and I'm very happy that it's back (and finally updated) ... I'll be joining your mailing list so that I can make sure to knw when chapter 5 comes out.
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Reviewed By: Ians_Koibito [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 08:39 CDT
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Wai~!!! More reviews here too~!!!! *does a happy dance*
halowing4 - Yes Yami-chan should and we shall see. ^.^ *cackle*
shantal - Thank you~
Bravo - No this is not the end! Yes there is more to come! ... Eventually.
angel_soul03 - ^o^. I didn't mean to scare you! ... Ok, maybe just a little. :p As for an answer to your questions, yes he's awake and I can't tell you yet. ^.^
jessi - I blushed writting it, it was my first attempt at writing a lemon ever. *blush* ^_^ I'm glad you liked the dreams in ch.2 they took me a long while to get them right. |
Reviewed By: jessi On: July 23, 2003 22:04 CDT
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. The way u get into yami's head is twisted, and i blushed at the lemon in the beginning. it's been a while since ive blushed while reading lemons. anyways , i hope seto doesn't push yami away, though it was wrong of yami to do that. I especially loved the dreams in chapter two. they send a shiver down your spine. please let seto be alright! |
Reviewed By: angel_soul03 On: July 18, 2003 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg. I got so scared for a second. I thought Seto was really gonna die... I am so glad that he woke up. Does he recognize anyone??? I have never before been held in such suspense. I love your fic. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Ashley On: June 14, 2003 16:29 CDT
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CONGRATS! YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF THIS STORY ITS GREAT! *SNIFFS* ITS SO SAD THOUGH I ALMOST CRIED!!
VERY WELL DETAILED MORE THAN MOST STORIES, AND NOT TO MENTION WELL WRITTEN AND THE INITIAL SHOCK WAS AMAZING, BUT IS THIS THE END? OR IS THERE MORE TO COME? I HOPE THE SECOND IS A 'YES'. |
Reviewed By: Shantal On: June 06, 2003 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the first three chapters and have to say that not only the writing very good, but the story is also very interesting and original. I realy hope to read more soon. |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! Love the Yami angst. He should be ashamed of himself for putting poor Seto through this. Hope it has a happy ending! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 15:52 CDT
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Y'know, a standing ovation doesnt sound that bad!! Bravo! |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear I ran away the first time I read this. I couln't believe what you had Yami do, but then I had to come back and see how it ended, because you'd hooked me. n_n What can I say? I have no willpower. Anywho, LOVE the Yami-angst/torture and all the pain you're causing both him and Seto! I aplaude your work! *gives standing ovation* |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 22:49 CDT
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0.o Oh yeah, this is one hell of a head trip-- but I like it!!! |
Reviewed By: Ians_Koibito [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 22:47 CDT
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Blue September, Mononoke~ You two are making me blush~~ ^_^ I love reviews~ *hugglz reviews* Makes me wanna write, although mm is being mean~ it's telling me that this story isn't even up. *lol* Have no idea how I'm gunna update it when the next parts done. *hugz Blue September* Thanks for giving me final push to get my butt on here. |
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