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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely, lovely, lovely, and more lovely. I can't wait to read more, you're style is exquisite; I can really imagine the scene in my head. Please write more!! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 13:07 CST
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Well, I'm halfway through and I thought I'd give you an "in progress" review! I'm really enjoying this unique AU. I love original characters that add rather than detract from the story and you've done this with Nurami. I really enjoy her attitudes and her reflections. She reminds me a bit of Japhia in Saiyajin (good thing!) I really like your Bulma too. Very in character--smart, self-absorbed, but generous and friendly. I can't wait to see how you hook her up with V---another good characterization. Lucky me, still have a few chapters to go before I have to beg for updates!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! As usual another wonderful addition to this equally wonderful story. Sorry that I haven't been on in awhile to review, but things got hectic. Anyway, please ury with the next chappy!!!
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Reviewed By: miaka16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 00:18 CST
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WOW!!! THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST CHAPTERS YET!!!! SIgh...I was smiling throughout the entire conversation at the end.....makes me feel warm inside....I LOVE IT!!!! KEEP UPDATING CUZ I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!
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Reviewed By: theshakeyone On: October 22, 2004 18:20 CDT
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ahhh!!!! hurry up with another chapter!!! so good!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: spini On: October 22, 2004 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes an update!!! Yippie!! Thank you so much! It was worth waiting! lol I absolutly love it!! It´s an amazing story! And yes I want some lemonade! lol Can´t wait for the next chapter! But you need time to write it, I know...lol! love ya
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 20:09 CDT
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YOU... UP..DATED!!!! and great exciting chapter too--primo B/V, blood and lust and humor and "I hate you"--and your writing is wonderfully descriptive. I could just live in this chapter for a while (I may). Great story. I'm so happy that the B/V is alive and well and in the hands of a talented writer like you.
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Reviewed By: spini On: September 29, 2004 10:14 CDT
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Every day I pray that you update your story soon! But I must do something wrong...mhh...what could it be?! Maybe I´m too dumb to pray...damn it! lol love ya
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Reviewed By: zskduh On: August 26, 2004 22:51 CDT
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update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update please update
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a seriousely evil cliffy!!! Please huryy with the next chappy; I don't know how long I can stnad it until I find out what happens to her!
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Title: "Accidental Redemption
Reviewed By: vbkjsdhbfvsjkhk On: July 30, 2004 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! You have a way to bring out the true personality in all of your characters. I can't wait to see what happens when Cooler comes-please update soon-it's so much fun reading these stories especially when written by such a gifted writer. Thanks again for a great story!
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Title: Caralin Fury
Reviewed By: Caralin Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 14:34 CDT
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Vegeta in lust...my favorite part of every good B/V story...and this is very, very good! Great job with Bulma's reaction to her break-up with Yamcha. The stinging depression hit some various emotional scars from my own past. I like how Bulma mourns her failed relationship...very realistic. A lot of stories have Yamcha/Bulma breaking up and her bedding Vegeta in the same day. (Yes I know this does happen in real life...I too have been guilty of rebounding), but I like this fresh and very human take on my favorite anime! Caralin BTW...loved the secretary's reaction to Vegeta. I would have been drooling too!
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Title: Chapter 10 *swoons*
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEY! That was a delicious B/V chappie! I'm so delighted to have found you--new, talented B/V writers make my day. I'm hopeful that you will be spinning tales for me and others for a long while as the older fungurls taper out of the obsession! I am impressed, as always, with your gift for narrative, the whole world you've created, the lingering on details like Bulma's messy room (I too always thought she was exacting in her lab--messy in her personal life!) No, you didn't bash Yamcha--he cheated, Bulma's pissed, so there. You didn't make him an abusive drunk or anything! And see around the DBZ Fanfic Salon, Proph! ;-) debbiechan
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Reviewed By: sue p On: June 25, 2004 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! You have a way to bring out the true personality in all of your characters. I can't wait to see what happens when Cooler comes-please update soon-it's so much fun reading these stories especially when written by such a gifted writer. Thanks again for a great story!
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Title: why I read fanfiction...
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 10:46 CDT
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Yep, this one's got it all! I started this one a while back, lost it, and have just read nine chapters in one sitting. You take well-worn threads and weave them into something new! There's a reverence for not only the anime here but for the whole mythology of older fics, and your narrative voice is mature, welcoming, sensitive to nuances in characters. Can't help you with plot as requested (I suck at plot) but I can suggest that maybe you use your gift for poetry, the whole lingering on a scene and telling about it with your smart omniscent voice, a little more sparingly. The story moves better when you show rather than tell, maybe three sentences on an image work better than six. You've got talent to spare! Please put me on your update list, debbiechan shalombayit@juno.com ps I think it's a real mark of talent to make an OC compelling, somehow natural to the dbz world you've set up, and not a distraction--you do that!
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