| "Anything For You" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel black On: June 28, 2003 12:09 CDT
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Kill Tim! GOt no ideas for a sequel................don't know. Maybe Aten and Aria as teenagers 0.0 very scary |
Reviewed By: Angel black On: June 28, 2003 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kill Tim! GOt no ideas for a sequel................don't know. Maybe Aten and Aria as teenagers 0.0 very scary |
Reviewed By: Angel black On: June 28, 2003 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kill Tim! GOt no ideas for a sequel................don't know. Maybe Aten and Aria as teenagers 0.0 very scary |
Reviewed By: Angel black On: June 28, 2003 12:09 CDT
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Kill Tim! GOt no ideas for a sequel................don't know. Maybe Aten and Aria as teenagers 0.0 very scary |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*kicking Ryan*YOU*kick*SON*kick*OF*kick*A*kick*BITCH!*kick*
Yakna:I am not cleaning up after you.
OK!^__^*looks at Ryan* And now as promised, I'm gonna torture you FAR worse than the yamis ever did.*smiles evily*And I'm going to enjoy it too.
THAT BASTARD! WHEN THEY KILL HIM HE'S GONNA JOIN HIS BROTHER!*smiles evily*And the other two will also join. Can't leave them outta all the fun, now can I?
POOR ATEN!*yells at Ryan*YOU'RE GONNA GET TORTURED MORE FOR HURTING A CHIBI AND RYOU!! YOU STUPID SON OF A BITCH!!
Ryan:O_O
PLEASE WRITE MORE!! Don't worry about Ryan. He's in good hands.
Ryan:Does that mean you're not going to hurt me?
When hell freezes over. But even then I'll hurt you.
Like I said he's in good hands.
~*~*~PRAISE THE CHEESE~*~*~ I just realized that today is the last day for that.;_; Moment for the cheese please. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back for good now!!! Everything is fixed!! So I can go back to reading everyday now ^_^ I'm glad that ou killed off Ryan! I can't wait to see what happens when they find Steven, Jessica, and Tim! |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: June 27, 2003 15:55 CDT
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Oooooooooo........one down......three to go! YOu know it's knid of funny, i know boys who would gross out at this stuff, but i write it too. ^_^ Haven't written it on the internet yet, but i did one for a story in school. ^_^ Luckily the teacher was a mousy one. |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: June 27, 2003 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*maniacal laughing* You have NO clue how happy that made me! I actually laughed through all of Ryan's dieing! You're not going to hurt Aten too much anymore, are you? And are the other three beats going to die soon? I'm sure "beasts" is too nice, but right now any name is too nice. One last question; when can we give weapons to Bakura and Marik? I have a very nice one for them *more insane laughter. Keep up the lovely work! |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: June 27, 2003 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!! That drunken, worthless, peice of shit bastard got just what he deserved! *Laughs evily* To bad about Marilk just missing them... Can't wait to see you're next maserpeice of a chapter! :D |
Reviewed By: Sailor Optimal Optmus On: June 27, 2003 12:50 CDT
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Aw man, the trio escaped! hehehe, too bad for Ryan.
Who was the someone Steven's talking about? Is it Stellar, the guy that didn't like his job? Or is it someone new? Please don't tell me Jessica and Tim are gonna keep raping Ryou. Otherwise, I might end up going thinking of thousands of ways to killing them. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Optimal Optimus On: June 27, 2003 08:41 CDT
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If they find Ryou, Aten, Steven, Jessica, and Tim there, then I say make it very graphic. Give Steven, Ryan, Jessica, adn Tim h*11. |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really? YAY!
Thats was a nice song. Never heard it but I liked it.
YEAH THEY'RE GONNA DIE!! YAY!! Can you make it gorey? With lots a blood and guts? And screams of agony and fear? And blood spraying everywhere and they can't escape. They try and can't*gets hit on the head*OW! What was that for?!
Yakna:You were about to go n a killing spree.
Oh. Hehe Sorry if I scared ya. I just like it.
And I leave to kill Ryan.*grabs dagger and deck* Doma and my Man Eater Bug. They'll do nice.
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
~*~*~PRAISE THE CHEESE~*~*~ |
Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 06:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRAPHIC!!! GRAPHIC!!! GRAPHIC!!!! Somebody is gonna die!!!! Nobody messes with the yamis and gets away with it!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Okay, *deep breath* Okay, I'm okay. I'm fine, I'm not laughing, I'm crying and I don't know why. That song is so pretty! I like it!! Must go download it.
Keep up the good work!
~Shade~ |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 21:42 CDT
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Oh I wouldn't laugh. Um I don't remember the song but it's so sweet. Now why would I laugh? besides, we kinda needed a break from hte angst stuff. Poor Ryou... but they finally make it? Oh sweet!! Yeah make it so gorey that it puts horror movies to shame!! And death is WAAAAAAAAAY to good for any of those sick--well i don't know what to call them because every name I can think of would be insultign hte thing the name came from (ex. bull shit, insulting... well a bull's shit ^^;) But hey you take ya think ^^ love the fic i jsut hope Ryou and Aten will be okay... |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 16:08 CDT
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How graphic can you make it? That'd be veeeery nice... As long as none of the bishies die... |
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