| "Kikyo" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Awful
Reviewed By: Sucky story On: December 07, 2004 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I could use zero, but sadly 1 is all I can muster. You do realize that 3 paragraphs doesn't qaulify for even a PROLOGUE, and dare I question your atrocious unoriginality. So PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ kill yourself, or quit fanfiction FOR-EV-ER. But sadly you've fallen to far into iliteracy to get out. Plain and simple: Y-o-u S-U-C-K a-t f-a-n-f-i-c-s! Quit them and try to buy a life at K-Mart, but it seems they'll need a really stupid one to fit you right now. Seriously, PLEASE kill your self.....
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Reviewed By: Bunny On: June 11, 2003 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't quite get what the story is about. The summary was a little confusing at first because i thought you were going to write an inu yasha-Kikyo fic. If that happened i would have x-ed out quicker than you could imagine!(Ha) Nothing personal, i just don't care for kikyo. All in all.....i liked it. your writing is clear and easy to read. The only things that sort of messed me up were when you left letters off the ends of words like "though" when you meant "thought". you write good, i like your story so far and keep up the good work! (:
P.S...Don't let me get to you, as you could tell i like to give constructive critisism! |
Reviewed By: darkmagik [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thought it was prety good not lying it got me intreseted in it ony some stories ive read can give me a prefect mind eyes veiw. i like the way those stories do but ill keep reading |
Reviewed By: darkmagik [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
thought it was prety good not lying |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: June 04, 2003 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i cant really give it alot of rates cuz its only one chapter right now but eventually if i keep readin tha rest im sho i'll give it a good rating it seems like a very interstin fic! iight lataz! |
