| "Yugi's assault" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was a really great story. I couldn't stop reading it was so good. I was almost in tears from the sadness of this story. Please Please finish your story. Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeee. |
Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 00:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
please please please continue! If you don't then i'll go crazy!! ^.^ HEEHEE!!
anyway its super good and i really want you to continue.
*!!Emily!!* |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: July 01, 2003 15:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am sorry I haven't read in awhile. This is getting sad. But I don't trust Pegasus either...oh well. I am still reading this and I hope you update soon! PLEASE! Arigato! Jaaa!
(The Yami, Jou, and Seto hug would have been an interesting picture to see....hmmmm)^_^ |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 13:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG POOR YUGI! O.O Is he gonna be ok? *hugglez Yugi plushie* Update? Maybe much longer chappie? Please? Pwease? |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya, what was that stuff that female dog gve yugi? and will he make it out alive? pleae don't let it be a dath fic.... iI don't think I culd stand those Well anymore of them anways.. |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: June 12, 2003 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright what the hell was in that chocolate mousse? Hmmm...well this is a great fic and I love reading it soooooo update with more chappy very soon please! PLEASE! Arigato! Ja ne! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Yami's-Girl On: June 11, 2003 22:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
No No what did you do to
YUGI-CHAN?! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, those were quite a few chapters you posted. I liked them. Your lemon was pretty good. Short, but good. I hope you post more soon! I want to see what's wrong with Yuugi! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter! I liked it when Yuugi made that slip and let his Grandpa know that he likes Yami. Please post again soon! |
Reviewed By: Karenu-anime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story!!! Plz continue!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for fixing that. I liked that chapter! I hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated this. I like it so far. One criticism though, you have the same chapter posted for both chapter 2 and chapter 3. Maybe you could fix that? Anyway, post more soon! |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: June 08, 2003 09:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is turning out GREAT! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 02:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your fic. I wanna know what happens! Definitely continue! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 19:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting so far. Maybe the next chapter could be longer? Post more soon! |
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