| "Red isn't only blood" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: LIZZYSHART [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 06:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT IS AN OUTSTANDING STORY AND I'M DIEING TO READ MORE |
Title: updates
Reviewed By: star 67 On: September 01, 2003 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fanfic, it is well planned out and flows well, there are quite a few small errors in typing but other than that, I love this so please keep on updating and writing. :)
Also, I can't wait to see fluffy's reaction to kagome, they should spar or something like that where Kagome's full potential is finally brought out of her (but she let's fluffy live)... |
Reviewed By: Kagome's reincarnation On: August 31, 2003 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok have kagome kill kikyou,please,and have kagome call her "the miko from hell." Please have kagome have self righteous rant to everyone on how she is better than them all and on how they caused her pain worse than death.Please at least consider this possibility and love the fic. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2003 08:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Had I used my brain, I'm sure I could have already read your latest update ^^ At any rate, I still like the direction and pace of this. The tattoo...loved it. I look forward to the ball!
If you want, I can do a quick beta for you (or a full beta, if you want) on your next chapter(s). Your main problem is minor sentence structure problems, which are only natural since you're Italian ^^ I love this story, so I'm more than willing to help you with that! |
Reviewed By: Fire-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! THAT WAS GREAT PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 23:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I personally love the way you're writing this story. Then again, I love angst. I think you've portrayed Sesshoumaru perfectly...why on earth would he NOT kill Kagome, is the better question to be asked. You wrote it, in my opinion, the best way it could go. You're absolutely right when you say that he wouldn't feel anything for her at first meeting (disregarding an author's right to mold characters to their liking, of course). Your approach to this Sess/Kag fic is very unique, and I love it.
I'm also glad you didn't take offense to me pointing out the spelling errors...I know that I really appreciate it when others point out things for me. However, I was recently pretty much blasted by an author for giving her advice on improving her grammar/writing style, which was unreadable in areas. My fics might lack in plot and description, but darn it, I have decent grammar *grins* |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 09:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice updates. The only thing I see as strange are the reactions of Kagome's former companions after finding out she still lives...however...from an author's point of view I know there are reasons for everything (^_^) You need to watch your typing a bit more carefully, there were errors everywhere...but I know that chances are, you didn't proof read...I don't even proof-read *grins* |
Reviewed By: Paige On: July 13, 2003 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please finish! good job. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: July 07, 2003 13:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good...Details. Yeeaahhh, and update. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Uh oh, looks like Kagome is in trouble! It's refreshing to see them in a fight where he's not going starry eyed over her powers (^_^) He's just going for the kill, at least for now. Never anger a demon lord, ne?
Glad you did well on your exams...high school isn't too bad, at least I didn't think so (^_^) |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 21:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice fic, I look forward to more (^_^) |
Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this one over at FF.N before and I'm glad to read it again. I've been waiting forever for updates ;) |
Reviewed By: Artemis_of_NewMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it has the abilty to be wicked sweet. you totaly need to add more to itAnd keep makeing it a Sess/Kagome pareing p/z.
Artemis_of_NewMoon |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: June 05, 2003 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice! Must update! ^_____^ Sesshie!!! |
Reviewed By: Cj On: July 16, 2003 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating! I love this fic! please update soon I want to know how the to dog brothers will react to her! I bet tension is going to show up between the east and western lands anyway... UPDATE SOON! |
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