| "The Doctor's Referral" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: anss123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 11:34 CST
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I agree with another reviewer that 'sperming' Ranma came 'out of the left field', but thinking about it I assume it is part of a larger sinister plot (perhaps a pregnant Ranma will be thrown out of the dojo… turn to the nice doctor for help etc….) Anyway I hope you continue the fic as it is all around well written, and one of a kind as far as I know.
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Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done, and with evil thoughts. I am left wondering how much Tofu really knew about this doctor, as well as how far she plans to take this with Ranma. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ??? On: February 27, 2005 14:39 CST
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I want more. Plot is good even in dark fics so I don't know what the person that reveiwed as you is talking about. Can't wait for any update you plan on doing.
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Reviewed By: Mermaid Ninja On: January 15, 2005 13:56 CST
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Please keep going.
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Title: Story status
Reviewed By: WaL On: April 01, 2004 04:52 CST
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Couple of things... this story is meant to be a 7-part fic and it was all planned out. The problem is that I never actually wrote the other chapters out. Considerring that I tend to only write lemon fics under the "What's a Lemon?" name as a side hobby that means it could take a while... as is obvious by how long it has stood un-updated. Basically at this point readers can consider this fic to be open for continuation/change by other authors but with the notice that it isn't officially dead and may be continued at a later date. Although if I do so it'll have to be with a new account name as I've completely forgotten how to log into that particular account or for that matter which of my hundreds of email addresses is the password recovery one. I will however try to make the effort to get chapter two out since this latest request for the fic means that it does have people interrested in it... I just can't promise it is all. PS: Anyone have any clue how the heck someone managed to write a review for my story using my account? Very few people have access to my computers so I doubt it was one of them that posted that... they'd have heckled me more. ;)
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Reviewed By: ??? On: April 01, 2004 03:20 CST
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more?
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Reviewed By: tengetsu On: March 02, 2004 13:08 CST
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u gonna continue it?
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Reviewed By: Wandering Idjit On: July 18, 2003 12:27 CDT
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Any plans to continue? |
Reviewed By: Janissa On: June 12, 2003 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all I enjoyed the story, until the last paragraph which I will explain later. I like how you developed the plot but thought that you hurried it along the last page. I also did not like the last paragraph, why would any woman do what the Doctor did. domination I can see, but getting her pregant, that came out of left field. Also the dildo was a life size model of a male's organ. Now a young female virgin may not recognize it but Ranma would and she / he would automatically know something was seriously wrong, at the very least he would be kicking ass or pissed, not to mentioned shocked. Keep writting I like your style and creativity.
Janissa |
Reviewed By: What's a Lemon? [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another wank-fic that turns Ranma-chan into a sex-toy. Why am I not surprised...
Pretty good writing ability and story buildup though. Of course if you really wanted to make a dark-ish lemon you shouldn't really have wasted time on building up a plot. |
Reviewed By: goku_90504 On: June 14, 2003 23:58 CDT
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i normaly dont like stories like this but you have done it very well |
