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Reviewed By: balck beauty On: August 10, 2003 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Another wonderful written chapter. I love the fact that you update really fast. I can't wait to see where the two of them will go from here. Will their relationship develop slowly or will they opt to jumpt into after some major life changing events That's pretty much how other fic go, so I'm really curious on how you will go about this. Keep up the *GREAT* job. |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 09, 2003 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
And you did it again. Yuppie. Another wonderful chapter and oh! What a cliffhanger. I wonder how Dou will react? Keep up the great job. |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 09, 2003 00:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
All I have to say is it's about damn time!!!! x.x;;; I thought it'd never get here...blah....Anyway...*ahem*
*throws confetti* Go Heero! >o< Be blunt! Blunt is your friend!! Blunt is what helps you win arguments!!! |
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God. That, my dear, is a cliffhanger of nightmarish proportions. If it weren't for the fact that you update every single day, I would have gone insane by now over this fic. I can hardly wait until tomorrow...I need to read the rest of this fic right now! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 07, 2003 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have just become one of my all time favourite writers because you always update your fic. Keep up the *GREAT* job. |
Reviewed By: Roy On: August 06, 2003 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is alright, and I was really enjoying it in the beginning. It was fast paced and flowed along nicely without getting too dull. But now it has slowed in pace considerable and I get the feeling that you are trying to drag this fic out as long as possible. I really do not think two point of views is really necessary for 'every' situation between the two. If you are a good writer, which I know you are, you should be able to show everything you need to with just one person's view. I am only saying this because it gets irritating to have to recap a situation over and over again just to see how 'Duo' reacted to it, or how 'Heero' took this. I know you are trying to show how they are constantly misreading things, but we could also get this point and not have to sit through repeated scenes over and over again.
I do enjoy this series though. But I recommend to anyone to wait till it is finished before starting to read or read any more, for the chapters are not very fulfilling and are constant cliffhangers. |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 05, 2003 19:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
;___;!! *hugs Heero* The poor thing!!! *pets his hair*Man, I'd hate it if someone said something like that. Not that it hasn't happened...*is pretty sure someone's said something like that to her before* Nyeh, my memory is faulty :\ |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've ben reading the last few chapters at your site .. You post faster there than you do here!! Sooo I just wanted to come back here to tell you how much I'm enjoying your story and how I look forward to reading the next chapter>>> Please keep updating |
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 15:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aaaaghhh...the angst...it's killing me!
...okay, I'm a liar. I'm loving it. After all, we don't want everything to smooth out between Duo and Heero right away, do we? We wanna torture 'em first! I may sound like a sadist, but I'm sure people agree with me.
Good work. Looking forward to the next part with much anticipation. |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 03, 2003 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. I love this fic, this is getting better and better. Keep up the great job. |
Reviewed By: Yira On: August 03, 2003 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
D'oh. Poor Heero. He was all set for an appology and Duo won't let him. v.v Maybe 'Fei and Sally can help sort it out >.>;; It'd be amsuing if Une did somehow. o_o;; Or are they just gonna do it on their own? Hehehe that'll be hell for them XD *snickers* Well, good job...
Oh, and on that one-shot you did, I forgot to add something. It's not that bad having a disability. Sure, you get frustrated with it, especially if you haven't had it your whole life..but you get used to it, you live with it..it becomes a part of you. It has its ups and downs...but it's not that bad. o_o
*cough* Now that that's done...>.>;; Ja |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Heero isn't it? I just know it is, you seem to be setting up for that and it just seems right.
Fei would be too obvious a choice but Heero would really throw Duo for a loop. ACK! I have to get off but write more really really soon!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 31, 2003 00:02 CDT
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O_o Wonder who's at the door..could be Heero coming to pick Duo up...could be Sally...could be Wufei...hmmm ^-^ Could be someone I haven't thought of yet. XD
Anyway...keep it up! |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I diden't think you where going to post something today ..It was geting late it is now 11:00 pm here in Waco, Texas thats where I live... I really like this chapter and look forward to reading tomorow's ..Is that Heero at the door ? I bet it is!!! I like that Wufei and Duo are such good friends ... The plot of this story has gon verry well and I will keep reading thanks |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 30, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on, don't do this to me, to us your readers... That cliff hanger is too much to handle. You have to update soon. I need to know what happens next. So keep up the great job. |
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