| "White Padded Room" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: white padded room
Reviewed By: lilNaomi On: September 09, 2003 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the idea and well everything about it but im wondering what happend to ryou-chan i meen he didnt do anything to deserve that does he get out do they visit him do the nurses notice the diffrence and how to bakura-san n jou-san live and get by |
Reviewed By: Dina-san On: July 17, 2003 16:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
*does genki dance* I'm so happy you updated. I was checking everyday...that's kinda sad, demo it was such a good story! I just had to keep looking for it. Wow..I'm surprised that worked and that Jou actually hit poor Ryou. You're going to give an epilogue, ne? I hope so, keep writing, I love your stuff. |
Reviewed By: Dina-san On: June 15, 2003 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
DS: Ano, I want more. That's about as basic as I can put it. It's a really good fic. I love that you did research so that you could do it right. That's what's making it so interesting to read.
YS: R-i-g-h-t. It has nothing to do with you having gained a new favorite yaoi couple, ne?
DS: That too. So when is the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: Keiko On: June 09, 2003 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really missed your updates on ff.net, and I'm really glad I found it here! ^^ I missed two awesome chappies! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DD: I think this story is AWESOME!
YD: Needs some lemon.
DD: *smacks YD* Sex-crazed yami!
YD: Well, it does!
DD: Oh, shut up! Anyways...I really like it! I hope you'll put up more soon!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: *gasp * You are an Arcana fan! Yay!
Karen: Well, that makes sense.
LD: Great story so far. I love this pair and you don't see much (though it is gaining popularity)
Karen: I love almost anyone with Ryou, but Bakura is a little tougher. I think he and Jou are good for each other.
LD: You are just saying that.
Karen: No, really. And I just love the way you've put them together. I felt so sad about that trying to hug Ryou bit.
LD: She almost cried.
Karen: He is not evil, just misunderstood. |
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JC: You're writing here now too! Great!
Kathrine: Kura and Jou... *Purrs*
JC: Keep up the great work. We love this fic.
Kathrine: Who doesn't like Bakura and Jou trapped together in an insane asylum, having to deal with raging hormones?
JC: NOw everyone Kat.
Kathrine: Anyone who doesn't should read this fic. Then they would.
JC: NOw your just sucking up so she'll update faster.
Kathrine: I can always check out FFNet. But she needs to update there too. Have ta know what happens. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 08:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic!! Can't wait to see the next chappie!!! I'm sad it's ending, though......
Keep up the fantastic writing!
~Shade~ |
Reviewed By: Yami giselle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was great! I never thought of a Joey/Bakura but it's good so keep writing this is getting good!! |
Reviewed By: Yami giselle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Write more. It's getting great!! |
