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"Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ]
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 Reviewed By: InkLock [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2009 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Brilliant, I am completely enthralled by this story, I hope you update soon I would love to read the rest of what that astounding mind of yours can come up with.
 Reviewed By: InkLock [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 30, 2009 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
With just the prologue i've already become an active reader, I love your writing technique. Great job, hope the rest of the story is just as enthralling.
 Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 02, 2009 06:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn it if you dont update this i'm coming after you with sporks for your eyes!
 Title: Please continue
Reviewed By: jambacute [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 12, 2009 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok. I'm with the last review. I found this fic as fantasic as ever. I enjoy this story so well that I could't sleep at night because i can't stop thinking about it. I know that personal life gets in the way, but please don't let this story die like so many others!!!
 Title: please. i'm begging you.
Reviewed By: orphanedhanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2009 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you haven't updated in nearly 4 years. but i checked. you logged in last month. therefore a lack of an ending to this awesome story is unacceptable. forget that i myself have never published, much less had the patience to finish any fanfic of mine, with any amount of quality near your own. or that life gets in the way. or that i haven't waited 4 years for anything because i discovered your story yesterday. once i started reading it i didn't go to bed. with some distractions/breaks i've read your whole work straight through. i began at least 8 hours ago factoring in the breaks and without factoring in daylight savings time. it is now nearly 9 AM this story has great humor, chemistry, and plot twists. honestly not as close to perfect believability as i've seen other writers get. but much to enjoyable to give up on you without a fight. i am just trying to strengthen the hope of fanfic readers everywhere that stories have an end. so i created a mediaminer account for the first time just to review your story. just in hope that you may take pity on me and my fellow readers and be inspired. forgive my forwardness. you have to remember its 9 AM and i find myself on a seemingly hopeless mission. but the worst part isnt that you didnt continue your story. its that you let us with this: "He would have his victory, he would have his fuck, and then he would have his revenge. Not bad for a plan B." f***ing gold. GOLD. (see-i even used HTML for you) that line deserves a Pulitzer (of course from your notes you are from/in the UK and as i just googled you have to publish your work in the US to get a Pulitzer but you get my drift). haven't i gotten my desire for you to finish this enrapturing fic across? i hope so. cause after all that i'm done. i promise, ^.^;
 Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2008 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love this story. I only wish that it would continue. You are by far one of the best writer's I have ever read, from any genre. You have a lot of talent, and I am sure you could be a professional writer, if you aren't already. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know you have done a fantastic job with this. I look forward to reading your other stories.
 Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 02, 2007 08:10 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
As I told you in the email I sent you I do enjoy this fic and I agree, it's a shame if you don't finish it, but then again I've abandoned most of my older stories too so I have not room to talk. Anyways it made me happy to read to 22, and I hope you continue it, or at the very best continue writing, I love your writing style and I'll be sure to check out your other fics. Best wishes and I hope I get to read more one day. =)
 Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 13, 2006 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good story, its a shame you never continued with it...
 Title: Nifty!
Reviewed By: Prophet WolfStar [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 27, 2005 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHH! More please! XD I
 Reviewed By: ITesa  On: May 29, 2005 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
A) It is only "right and proper" for a young couple to go to bed together when they are married. The rest of the world may say it's "OK" for them to go to bed before they're married but that is worlds different from "right and proper." B) The word you want is "chaste." It's "a chaste kiss," not "a chastised kiss." I really enjoy this story and the different angles you use to show us the characters. This chapter makes me uncomfortable though. There are kids on the net and many of them read fanfic. Nobody should tell them that it's "right and proper" for them to sleep together. They haven't yet developed the emotional maturity or the responsibility to deal with sex and its many repurcussions.
 Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2005 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've been away for a while and finally got to catch up on the last few chapters of my favorite story. You just keep on surprising me! I love the twist with the Kais having planned all of this out for their benefit. So devious to think of the gods manipulating us to their advantage!! OMG Shuma as a woman ---- too evil!! I love it! And that last line in the last chapter is just too memorable. "He would have his victory, he would have his fuck, and then he would have his revenge. Not bad for a plan B." Just a PERFECT Vegeta quote. Looking forward to next chapter but no worries. We all understand fiction comes next to real life :)
 Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 17, 2005 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, real life comes before fake life. It was a great chapter even if it was short. Take your time if you need it, but I'll be waiting for the next chappie!
 Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2005 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah! I figured it out. Every time I type the "less than" character in the little mad face emoticon, my review gets lopped off! Anyway, now I can properly review: Your writing lately has been making me think about the characters--and here I thought I'd exhausted thinking about them! I'd written my own Dr. Briefs tiny back story just days ago and now I'm giving it more dimension after reading this short chapter! I can't believe that I haven't missed Vegeta in this story--truly a mark of a well told tale because I'm a Vegetaholic--but your ending was so full of promise and I'm sure when he shows up, there will be the STORM after the CALM and I'll just be all "ooooooooh" :-) Sorry real life is a bitch--when things are sucky, your stories and art make me happier. Dream of Vegeta and no rush with the next chappie--I'm getting milage out of everything you write!
 Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2005 14:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
it did it AGAIN! Why does mm.org crop my reviews short for you and you alone???????? I was going to say that I appreciate all the generosity you give to characterization in your fics... lemme see if this goes through and then I may write more. >.
 Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2005 14:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
loooooooooved the glimpse into Papa Briefs personal life. Afraid to leave longer review because I just saw that my last one for "Feeding Genius" got cropped short >.
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