| "Beginnings" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: keeko On: August 02, 2003 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story line so far. I haven't read many fan fics, but so far this is becoming one of my favorites. As far as your style of writing goes, I'd have to say it's as good as some authers of real books out there. And you could easly write a book of your own. You've obviuosly got an amzing imagination. And with out that you couldnt be considered a writter in my point of view at least. So please keep writting. Your writting is really wonderful. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: July 30, 2003 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Give me more! Im loving this fic it is totaly original and I cant wait for more. I check up on this story all the time! I dont want it to end but at the same time I want to find out what happens. Keep writing your style is amazing! Please hurry with more chapters! Thanks for writing this story. |
Reviewed By: yen On: June 21, 2003 12:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your writting style is so awsome. This last chapter had me in tears. Im truly a softie.
Keep up the writting
:) |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: June 19, 2003 15:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my this is amazing. I love it. It's wonderful. Please write more. I realy wished that she would end up with Kyo, but know I don't know. I kinda want her to end up with both of them. Is that possible without seeming wrone? Hm I hope so.
SHADY |
Reviewed By: peanutbaby13 On: June 16, 2003 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAHHHHHHHH! To be honest I've seen this fic posted and skipped over it (mainly cause my fb interest whas waned) but I am sooooooo glad I read it! This is awesome! You've truely captured the characters personas. This is great!
One request: no more bunny torture, onegai!*pet pets poor momiji* |
Reviewed By: yen On: June 17, 2003 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic really pulls you in. I finished what has been written so far and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope she picks Kyou. And that Akito either dies or goes away. I really don't like him.
~*Yen*~ |
Reviewed By: lazyrunnerz On: June 10, 2003 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Your writing is beautiful, and the characters are really vivid. They're never OOC. I feel as if I'm pulled into the story. *I wish anyway* This part was so sad though. I hope it all works out. Keep writing you have extradinary talent. By the way, I want her to end up with both of them! I don't think I've ever read a furuba fic where that's happened. y/k k/t t/y, but never y/k/t. It could be done in a respectable way. If that's not a possibility though then I'd go with kyou. I can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: June 10, 2003 10:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow this is amazing. I realy hop ethat you continue. I would love to see which one she winds up with. My vote goes to Kyou. Poor little rabbit. Akito is such a jerk. Please continue this, Your doing a wonderful job.
SHADY |
Reviewed By: Kendricks Alashane On: August 18, 2003 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Love it! Love it! I cant believe I skipped over this so many times. Im dying here. I must know what's going to happen next. Kepp going don't stop. EVER! (J.K)
~K.A.~ |
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