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| "Last Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 15:59 CDT
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So, is this a sess/kag fic? N'eh, tis fine w/ me. Twas a good chappy. LOL, inu and sess got in a fight. HA! Loved it, keep it up! Yup yup!
Raye-Rei | Reviewed By: Demonchic_K On: June 11, 2003 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing. I've never read anything like this it's really really really..........good. This is a great idea and i cant wait to see the rest and see what else amazing you got. Just keep writing and if you write other stories, i know ill read them. Keep it up girl!!!!!!! ^.^ | Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 14:31 CDT
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This is really good. I'm liking it. Hmm, could the injection fluid be a way of tracking Kagome? I like it tons! Keep it up! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Niki aka Inu-ona On: June 10, 2003 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really like your fic - completely different from anything I've read. Keep writing in circles, it makes it more intresting, and definetely a better story. It's not as confusing as I think you think it is, but the foreshadowing and pace is great. And let me guess - the red liquid is some sort of tracking device, or maybe it's some of her original blood. One question, you'l probably gonna explain it later in the fic, but Kagome existed before right, I mean, they do mention about "a story" when they're naming her, and she's obviously a recreation of someone because "he" (*grins*) went into so much detail when giving the men instructions, so yeah, she existed before, right? Well, answer it if it doesn't give anything away, or not, you're the author, so the only thing I can actually tell you to do is... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, good job so far and Ja ne! | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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