| "Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kris On: June 19, 2003 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh gods... My heart keeps twisting and bubbling - and gods that feels weird! - and now I'm getting rather confused.
Is Heero going to end up with Wufei or with Duo?
He seems to be obsessed with Wufei as usual but obsessions and first loves die incredibly hard. Besides, Wufei only looks at Heero as a brother, with gratitude, that kind of thing. I've never read him doing anything different in this story.
Besides! Duo is always worried about Heero, and there is an attraction between the two of *them*.
But, ::sigh:: Heero just might end up alone. I hope not! But I don't want Wufei and Duo broken up either. pfh. Methinks me don't know what mewants.
But,gotta tell ya, I love how you put Relena in on this one! I can't stand her and Heero as a couple, you see, and I hate having her bastardized over and over and Heero deserves such a wonderful friend!! I'm happy for him.
An' in case you were wondering, the 9 for the grammar is nothing personal. I just don't give 10's on grammar ratings. I don't think it's possible!!
Please write more of this story and quickly! Me's hooked.
-Kris |
Reviewed By: Aria On: June 18, 2003 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HECK DID YOU DO THAT FOR!? YOU ARE TORTURING POOR HEE-CHAN!!!! HE DOESN'T DESERVE THAT ABUSE! On the bright side this is still a brilliant story and I want you to write again really really really soon, cause if you make me wait I will not be happy and may not review! j/k
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Aria On: June 18, 2003 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more right away, this promises to be a great story and I want to read more. I can figure out that it was Heero who helped them buy their dream house. Maybe with Relena's influence,
he managed it. I hope everything turns out okay,
I don't want poor Hee-chan to be left out of everything! He deserves some happiness and I want you to update this right away!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria
P.S. If you need advice or anything give me an e-mail at footballpyro777@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 23:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
most interesting
i love a good heero angst in the morning
hehe i cant wait for u to UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: PreventerPixie On: June 16, 2003 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please!!
poor heero...i love it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: PreventerPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 01:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
please please continue this...heero's my fav character and this fic sounds very intresting
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Reviewed By: PreventerPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
please please continue this...heero's my fav character and this fic sounds very intresting
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Reviewed By: PreventerPixie On: June 18, 2003 13:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohhh~~...more more please! it's really good, sad, but good ^_^ hurry with the next part please
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Reviewed By: lady malynn On: June 11, 2003 09:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!!!!! MORE! MORE! MORE! heero angst is one of my favorite ways to pass the time ^_^ |
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