| "Servi Vitam" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: kaibajoey1 On: July 26, 2004 01:10 CDT
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KJ1's yami- I'LL DO MORE THEN HURT YOU I'LL KILL YOU!!!!!!!!! KJ1- sorry about that my yami is not in a good mood today. she's been waiting forever for an update and this on was so short and... and.... OH HELL I'M JUST AS MAD I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!! kJ1's yami- oh no she's mad. RUN!!!! * hides * KJ1- *blinks* sorry lost it there. please update soon i love your stroy and i can't wait for more of the chapters to be put up.
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Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:23 CDT
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Oops. Forgot to sign out of my and Starzie's account. Don't think Starzie will read this. She has a thing with lemons at the moment. Just wanted to make sure you knew that it was just RedFox reviewing... SORRY!!!!
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Reviewed By: RedFox and Starzie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:19 CDT
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Cool. I really like this. Seto and Katsuya are so cute together. ^-^ And Jou is just cute in general! *huggles Jou plushie* ^-^ Anyway, I can't wait for an update. You bondage person you! ^_~.....
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 18, 2004 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze update!!!
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Reviewed By: phoenixhazel On: October 31, 2003 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeeeyah! The suspense! What's gonna happen next, what's gonna happen next? (yes I'm over-doesed on candy, it's haloween! *sulks*) Poor Jou! So much angst! *huggles the blonde puppy* Lucky Seto's there to cheer him up! *grins* The lemons are great! Nicely written. It's hard to stop writing them after you start, huh? It's a gret story and I hope to see more of it soon! I keep imagining this part where Jou suddenly says something and everyone is just shocked! XD! *over-active imagination* Please continue soon! *clings*
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Reviewed By: Yasha! On: October 31, 2003 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAM some one took my name i have used on here since i dont have an account i have used this name for 3yrs and some one decides to take it! grr that makes me so mad i love this story so much itj is so kawaii y did u stop! this is such a good story you kno plz up-date soon yugi-chan will cry and give u the puppy eyes if you dont!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: schu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 15:13 CDT
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really good ^^ update soon, onegai; i'll be waiting for the next chapter ^^
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Reviewed By: Sprinket On: July 19, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey tis was great but it would be even better if u put up next chap up plz!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this and can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: WingZero Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 05:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I LOVED IT!!!! BUT DAMN YOU!!! DID YOU HAVE TO STOP THERE!!!!.....sorry its 6:15 in the morning i've been up snice 5 and im pretty hyper but i loved your story, write the next chapters soon and post them ok cuz i wanna know what happens with Jou ok bye bye on to read another storys...keep writing...:P |
Reviewed By: MalikLover On: June 14, 2003 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's such a good fic! Write more, write more. Hey, I know I'm not one of the lucky three people to choose a couple... *sheepish look*.. but if you can, could you put YamiMalik/Malik in your story???
I also love the Jou/Seto pairing! There just aren't enough of those on MediaMiner.
Keep up the PERFECT writing (not good, but perfect)!!! |
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 19:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
JC: We thouhgt up a title you could use for this story.
Kathrine: You could call it Servi Vitam. It means Slave's Life, or Life of a Slave more specifically.
JC: It's latin and I do believe that people learned Latin back then if they were Royak or important because of talking to the Foreign Nations like Italy during the Roman Empire.
Kathrine: Anyway, just something we thought u so that it doesn't have to remain Untitled. |
Reviewed By: Lady Eos On: June 11, 2003 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! Yay!! I was hoping that Bakura and Ryou would be in this fic and they are. ^__^ You're doing a great job. Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Eos On: June 11, 2003 09:49 CDT
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You did very well for your first lemon. I like it when people decide to give Seto a chance to be nice to Katsuya. I rarely see that in a fic. Very good job on this chapter. |
Reviewed By: Split Persona On: June 11, 2003 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kathrine: If you don't update I will hunt you down!
JC: This was the first Jou/Seto fic we read on FFNet and we were hooked from the start. We hadn't even known they made these two a couple until this.
Kathrine: Only because we'd never checked out the YGO section before. Anyway, this is a great fic and we would love to see where it is going.
JC: Definitely, now please update so that we can find out what happens next.
Kathrine: And I like your definition of 'almost rape'. Definitely allows more than JC would. I think I'll stick with it.
JC: You're just sick and demented.
Kathrine: And there is a problem with that? *Looks genuinely confused*
JC: 0.0 Nevermind... |
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