| "Causing Chaos in the Dimensions." Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maylar On: July 09, 2003 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it comin'!! Your story Keeps getting better and better!! |
Reviewed By: katcat On: July 04, 2003 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this new found couple! Please write more! I love you! |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
A Pan and Hiei fic... YEAH!!!
I totally invented that couple, and I'm glad that someone else can see that Hiei/Pan are the PERFECT match!!! I mean, they just look so CUTE 2gether!!!
I'll be on the lookout for more updates, so please update soon.
Or I will PERSONALLY kick your ass!!! |
Reviewed By: Setsuna Saotome On: July 02, 2003 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue or I'll use the "Dark Dome Close" on you!
I love this fic, that is why you must continue NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Suna-chan |
Reviewed By: Bejipan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You didn't really have to stop writing, did you? Add more soon.
Bejipan
PS Watch out for the BOLD button. |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's wrong with you and every other author being all cliff hangy!? I mean, One can only take so much until fire and anger explodes in a fic with revenge! Geeze! I hope to GOD ur going to update this fic or else there will be major hell in store for you- one that will make Trunk's torture look like he got off easiy! Okay? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Maylar On: June 18, 2003 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVIN' YOUR STORY!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!! JUST ONE THING WOULD MAKE THIS STORY BETTER LONGER CHAPTERS!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nesha (2 lazy 2 sign in) On: July 25, 2003 15:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know... you can always get another free Yahoo! ID.
The Pan/Hiei club only has 3 members, but already someone has sent in a cute Fan Art pic of the two!!! *smiles* Sorry, I just had to tell SOMEONE!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryo_oh_ki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 10:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry. My idiotic cousin thought that she wrote this story... You can cuss her out or something...II LOVE THIS STORY |
Reviewed By: Ryo_oh_ki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 10:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ill...errr...update....dont kill...me...i thought...everyone hated this story at first soo...i stoppped...ill start again.... |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A. B. S. O. L. U. T. E. L. Y.
B. E. A. U. T. I. F. U. L. |
Reviewed By: Maylar On: June 14, 2003 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOOM!!!!! I"M LOVING THIS STORY!! |
Reviewed By: me On: June 13, 2003 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dbzlover2!!! On: June 13, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Pan!! That bastard Trunks deserved the beating!! Please update!! |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!! |
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