| "The facts of life, sort of..." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
KAWAII!!! Omg.. you let it go too easy! You could have gone WAY out of it here.. lol.. maybe have a cornered fluffy actually go and kidnap someone to tell her! ^_^ now.. that would have been funny... 'you kidnapped me so that I can tell her about sex?' (housewife) "Ok, but it will cost you!" (Prostitute) "Damn pretty boy! Do it yourself!" (Inuyasha) |
Reviewed By: kili087 On: June 12, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very nice. i am still laughing. i never thought about something like this, but rin is a little kid and she would have to ask someone right?
any ways please continue if that is what you plan on, i would love to see what happens when she's 14. |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 15, 2003 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! that was HILARIOUS!! haha! i loved it! |
