| "Broken Vow" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Koneko On: June 13, 2003 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool!
It's really good though there are some mistakes. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Kaori On: June 13, 2003 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm impressed! You can write as good angsty parts as humorous ones and it's really a very rare attribute.
Your fic is great. I want to read more. Please continue (soon ^^).
By the way there are few mistakes but not that bad. And I think that Kurama's human name is Shuichi not Suichii.
Write more!! |
Reviewed By: Zefyr On: June 12, 2003 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent characterizations - Yusuke is a a great deal of fun in the most recent chapter! Although I'm not entirely convinced Kurama is always the softie he's shown to be - if anything, I'd expect Hiei to be the one to fall apart (privately) but to kill anyone who found that out. Bottom line, I'm intrigued and hope you keep going with it! |
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