| "Broken Vow" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: Phantom Kitsune
Reviewed By: Phantom Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great fic. I love it alot. Also try to read my fics once in a awhile and review to. I keepwriting on it. Come and vist my site to www.freewebs.com/sliverfox/ Enjoy ^_^
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Title: eh
Reviewed By: starfighter ( really I am Im just not loged in) On: December 27, 2003 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
so josh groban eh he sounds so old I really cant stand his voice, his lyrics, however are gold! That fic was awsome, it had all the elements of greatness, a better choice in muisc and you would have heaven. (jk bout the song)your going on my author list!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover On: November 30, 2003 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fic. I couldnt stop reading it. Thanks for entertaining a reader. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Gouka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 03:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic. It was angsty and seemed so heart felt that at parts I just wanted to snuggle up with Hiei and cry. You did a great job on this.
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Reviewed By: Ifurita [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good story. I had seen this story before, and had read the first chapter, then lost track of it. But today I saw it again. I finally got to read it all. I absolutely loved it! It was really good. Continue writing, I'll continue reading.
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 19:25 CST
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I hope you plan on finishing this story!! It is so sweet!! I loved it!!
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Reviewed By: ChasingMaybe On: September 28, 2003 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are some spelling and grammar mistakes, but your excellent writing style pretty much makes up for it. I love you so much!!!!! PLEASE hurry up with the fifth part! I can't wait!!!!!!! AAAIIIIII!!!!! Much *evil* love, ChasingMaybe
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Reviewed By: katarica On: September 05, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how it's going. the emotions seem very real. Very well tought out :)
BUT YOU HAVE TO FINISH THE GODDAMN STORY!!! *throttles you until you agree to finish and stop leaving her wondering how Kurama's gonna deal with both his new lover and Hiei's realization of feelings*
damnit.
*sniffles, all put-upon like* |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: July 24, 2003 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderful, especially chapter four! You have such a firm grasp of the characters and their personalities. I can't wait for the next chapter, please come out with it soon! |
Reviewed By: Leila [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a wonderful beaming thumbs up, mate! Yusuke was soooo real. It really peeves me when people don't get the character personalities right. But you knocked it right on the head. Beautiful!
-Leila |
Reviewed By: mocha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has got to be one of the best i've read in a while. can't wait for your next chapter! |
Reviewed By: JesPaiTha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I love this fic! I hope Kurama and Hiei are to be together again. Please update! |
Reviewed By: Koneko On: June 13, 2003 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool!
It's really good though there are some mistakes. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Kaori On: June 13, 2003 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm impressed! You can write as good angsty parts as humorous ones and it's really a very rare attribute.
Your fic is great. I want to read more. Please continue (soon ^^).
By the way there are few mistakes but not that bad. And I think that Kurama's human name is Shuichi not Suichii.
Write more!! |
Reviewed By: Zefyr On: June 12, 2003 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent characterizations - Yusuke is a a great deal of fun in the most recent chapter! Although I'm not entirely convinced Kurama is always the softie he's shown to be - if anything, I'd expect Hiei to be the one to fall apart (privately) but to kill anyone who found that out. Bottom line, I'm intrigued and hope you keep going with it! |
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