| "Inner Struggle" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Millenium Dark On: June 17, 2003 17:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you countinue, but... yeah, it's kinda wierd. Having the Millenium Ring must suck, Bakura's such a jerk sometimes. I like my Millenium Crystal much better, 'sept Bakura wants it so I have to put up with him. I don't get to as bad as Ryou, but... not far off... |
Reviewed By: *QueenOfGames* On: June 15, 2003 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I'm like sooo hooked on this now! lol the onlyt thing is there were a lot of like i danno funky things in your posting. I think it was like where quotations were s'posed to be, dontcha just hate it when sites funk it up like that? But anyways yea man this is awesome I love my Bakura! He's MY lil baka! muhaha! And Ryou man I sooo would looooooove to be in that room. Just a fly on the wall maybe.. heeeeeeee
grrr Anzu/Téa bugs lol
The *Queen Of Games* |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG! I LUV THIS FIC! *grinz widely* Baku seems confused, I don't think he's used to luv...hmmm...Well, I just want to say that you are a wonderful fanfic author. You write simply fablulous! ^^ Don't ever stop writing, because you should make a career out of it! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Angel On: June 15, 2003 05:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok. Very good. The best Ryou x Bakura fic I've read in along time.....most peopl I've read lately skip over the whole getting together part, and just have a mention or two of earlier abuse...... Please, please update. |
Reviewed By: ashley On: June 14, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please-please-please! PLEASE UPDATE! this story was good and i always liked the relationship between ryou and bakura and especially your evil angst filled one! *grins evilly* {im so evil}lol, anyway your story was really good so dont quit! no one like a quitter. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really good and really really sad!! I can't wai tutil you updaet again!! I hope it's soon! |
Reviewed By: Em On: June 16, 2003 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it to be a very interesting fic and besides it's so hard to find fics about our dear ryou
hope you will have the next chapter up soon... if there is one. |
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