| "The Loyal and Loving Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: Cool!!!
Reviewed By: Fi_a_na [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!!!!I LOOOOOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!PLS UPDATE MORE!!!
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Title: Make more Capters/stories!!onengai!!!
Reviewed By: Fi_a_na [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DoooD~!Please make more chapters!!!It nearly made me cry (except the lemon part) Keep up the good work dude!!!although ould you skip the Birth thingy?
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE HURRY PLEASE ^-^
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Title: Must read more
Reviewed By: Nell Midnight Fox 28 On: February 20, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please read more!^_I
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 07:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like your fic. It's not the best, I mean with the spelling and grammer and it could use a bit more detail, ya know? But for some reason, I want you to hurry up and UPDATE! Cause it's still really really good! So please UPDATE soon! Cause I'm really impatient and wanna finish! Heh, ok, I'll put you on my favorites and come back once you've updated. C Ya! ^_^ P.S. I think you mean, 'cum'. Not 'scum'. 'Cum' is another word for a guys sperm or I have heard people use it as another word for a womans wetness. And when you're pregenate, the mother pushes and takes deep breaths and the docter wears gloves of course. And the baby come out of the whole in between the womans legs, same whole the guys cock goes into. It stretches. If the baby is late or the doctors do an ultra sound on the baby; put gell on the mothers stomach then some metal things or sucktion cups or something, I can't really remember, to the stomach and on the screen it will show a weird fuzzy outline of the baby; if there is something wronge with the baby. So, if the baby is late then the doctor will ask if she wants to have the seasection. A seasection (spelling?) is where they give the mother a shot and numb her then cut her open and ake the baby out. If the ultra sound shows there is something wrong with the baby then there will most likely be seasection. Other then that the baby comes out from below and its all covered in blood and has to be washed off. Then the most gets to hold the babys a la de da de da. And you forgot that Sakura didn't give the babies a last name. It would be the same as the fathers even though the mother and father arent married or even together. Heh, my mom said I was late being born, but she didn't go for the seasection, she waited till I finally gave up and came out on my own. ^_^'
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Title: alert me onegai
Reviewed By: BritneyKagome *inuyasha* On: January 17, 2004 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want to be added to the alert thing so i can know if this story is updated cause i barely go to this site and when i do go here you havent updated yet so could you please tell me when this story is going to be updated? my email address is cheryl1029@sbcglobal.net by the way this story is really good and if you need any help or advice please ask me im on everyday this is a really good story i hope you continue it if you want to chat with me and you have AIM my screenname is BritneyKagome and if you want to read my stories they are at fanfiction.net and my pen name is Inuyashalover726 and they are not inuyasha stories i jus love the show and i think hes cute ^_^ maybe we could be real good friends ^_^ GREAT STORY!!!
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Title: Great^_^
Reviewed By: sailorjupiter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 17:49 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic I just read all the chapters from the first to the last one you updated. Please update soon! I tried finding this story on fanfiction.net but without any luck, you can email me at sweet_teen15@sailormoon.com to tell me where to find it. Thanks a bunch, and good luck with the rest of your story.
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Title: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU
Reviewed By: Kiri On: January 15, 2004 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK U SO MUCH ^-^ now all u gotta do is update it so we can all find out if syaoran finds her ^-^ o thank u again ^-^ i never thought u were gonna update it =^-^=
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Reviewed By: DeathsAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
'The doctor cut opened Sakura's stomach and then the doctor said to Sakura, "Now, give a few pushes."' um I think your getting mixed up on how to give birth. The docter only cuts the womans stomach if it's a c-section and then the lady would be drugged up and wouldn't push. Is she giving a vaginal birth? Oh well I like your story just wondering about that.
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Title: i love this storie hurry n finish it ok
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah just so u know this storie was tooken off fanfiction.net so u really need to update this ok ^-^please hurry i cant wait to see if syaoran finds sakura and what he will say to her, when he sees that she has two kids. >:)
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Reviewed By: DeathsAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like what you have so far. PLEASE update soon! I have the great temptation to thrattle Li at the moment though for being a....nvm. ~ja ne *cries* why are all bishounen gay?! Or at least it seems that way.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Update soon!
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Reviewed By: MissMess On: December 11, 2003 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
PLZ WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I WANNA KNOW IF SAKURA DOES LEAVE AND LI GOES TO FIND HER!!! I WANNA KNOW... PLZ WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: princess rayne On: November 30, 2003 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. I don't think your grammer is all that bad! Don't mind the ratings, takes a world shaker to get an average of ten from me. Good luck with getting 100+ rating! BTW- It's arigato, not arigatoo.
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Reviewed By: Blue-chan On: October 17, 2003 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOVVVVEEE your story!! Pleas write more HENTAI!!!!!!!!! I LLOOOOOOVVVVEEE to read HENTAI!
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