| "Unfinished Business" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this idea! I was thinking about the similarities between the two series the other day so it's like we're right on the same wave-length. I'm loving this fic so far!
So...for the record, I'm guessing Sano's probably Miroku since he's more than likely not Myouga-jiji. I can't wait to see who else you'll bring back. Hmm, Kouga maybe? Now that would be interesting!
Anyway, you've got me hooked, so keep writing and I'll keep reading!
~killarri |
Reviewed By: Wingson [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter!!!!! YAY! I still couldn't get to it on ff.net, but this works just as well, ne? It seems I can get to the third chapter now, but not the forth (that includes the prologue).
Anyways, this chapter was wonderful, and raises some interesting questions for me. If InuYasha was Battousai (or vice versa) would that make Tomoe Kikyo? Hmmm...food for thought. But I can't see a reason for her coming back. I like the talks that Kenshin has with Inuyasha. Death seems to have been good for him. He seems more mature.
Until next time, Write more and be happy!
WS
PS My favorite line? Something to the effect of: "He didn't believe in reincarnation, but it didn't matter, as it apparently believed in him." |
Reviewed By: Wingson [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!!!
You know, I couldn't find this on FF.net, but I seem to have found it here, so that's ok.
Wonderful style!!! Somehow I didn't picture the Shippo thing, but know that you mention it....I am seeing all of the connections. Is Saito going to be Sessomaru? (I have know idea if I have spelled that right or not.) and would Naraku be Shishio? Hmmm...there may not be a place for Kikyo (good riddence)
Next chapter soon, please!
WingSong
PS It is called the WAFF fans Anonymous for a reason. There are no meetings. All you need to do is really annoy a roomate/parent/sibling by reading outloud all the WAFF-y moments in all the fics you read. |
Reviewed By: Lilfrozenfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I'm not that big on Inuyasha and Kagome stories, but this seems good. You're right, too. They do seem to have many likenesses. Update soon, please.
Lilfrozenfire |
Reviewed By: Larania [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 14:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh heh heh... Nope, you haven't told me I'm your hero, and if I am, you need your head examined. Although I do really enjoy your style and ideas. Good luck with this... I am trying to imagine who the other Kenshin-gumi are going to be reincarnated Inuyasha-gumi, and I hope you have some... *cackles* surprises in store. |
Reviewed By: Kithkin On: June 18, 2003 22:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mmmm, a lovely little tale. I sincerely hope you continue. Sorry I don't have any constructive criticism, I enjoyed it too much. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cosmos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I love the way you combine their lives in dreams and in their eyes! and you know what! Inuyasha's eyes are purple when he's human. Interesting thought, ne? |
Reviewed By: Ria On: June 18, 2003 20:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
OHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! COOL!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: serena On: June 16, 2003 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there. i love the battousais eyes. there soooooooooooooooooo sexy!!!! lol!!!! is this going to be a battousai fun fic? PLEASE MAKE IT!!!! UPDATE SOON |
Reviewed By: MUSECHAN On: June 15, 2003 20:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was definently deja vu. I could actually see the whole story playing before my eyes, because the description was very vivid, and the way u desribed it was very clever. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: lunachan579 On: June 15, 2003 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanna read more! it's very clever! good job! |
Reviewed By: Kindred On: June 15, 2003 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great! It's wonderful how you made the connection between the eyes! You are really creative. So basically maybe the Bouttossai (Spelling?) is the Inu Yasha coming out cause that's where he gets the amber eyes? You have a really cool take on these stories. Please continue. Great job! |
Reviewed By: thracia On: June 14, 2003 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that I hope you continue with this story, and I can't wait to see what you do next. |
Reviewed By: Larania [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
*dies laughing* Kawaii! |
Reviewed By: Riana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 16:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
o0o0o0o0 COOL! |
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