| "Cupid's Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 17:20 CST
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Nice chapter. So Artemis may/may not have to marry the chief guy? Leave it up to Dante to come up with the "weird" plans...can't wait to see what happens! Oh, and the grammar thing was not bad. Authors like to use "ungrammatical" sentences to create an effect of sorts. (I use them quite a bit sometimes). Besides, this is a fic, not some English paper or what-not. Geez. Anyways, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Andrew C. On: November 04, 2003 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
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To whoever is writing the odd-numbered chapters... please take a second look at your writing. The first paragraph of chapter 5 did not have one complete sentence, and I counted several other errors as well. I suggest reviewing some grammar rules, or perhaps talking with your co-author who understand what a complete sentence looks like. Good luck; don't quit your day job, or better yet, pay more attention in school. (by the way I gave you a five for a 5/5 for the educated author and a 0/5 for the "kindergartener")
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Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 11:04 CST
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Nice chapter, except I couldn't read the last word. It turned into sì¥à on my computer. Anyway, I know we discussed what was going to happen when we began this but I don't remember, so would you please IM me with this information when you get over being tired of me? Great. Oh, and I wrote an entry in Lumeia (I even added you to my friends list so that you could read it) and I think it might clear some things up or perhaps it will confuse you even more. I'll try to have a chapter up asap.
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Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 17:22 CDT
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Well...ok then. So Dante is no longer acting like a complete idiot? Well, I thought it was funnier when he was, but eh, I still liked this chapter! Gotta give the guy some credit, I guess. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 12:41 CDT
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Wow, such a *fast* update! ;) And the funny antics of Artemis and Dante continue! Yeah, I would have read this yesterday afternoon, but mm.org was down. Anyways, GREAT CHAPTER! This story is really starting to get interesting. Update soon, k? |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 01:01 CDT
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Yeesh...it's about time you ppl updated! I had to reread the first two chapters just to remind myself what the heck had already happened. But eh, anyways, ...GREAT JOB!! Artemis and Dante are soooooo funny together! This is such a cool story. Hurry up and continue already!! |
Reviewed By: GundamJacob [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well what do you know? Both of my favorite authors {Not counting me, of course!} writing one fic! The whole espionage thing is awesome, but combined with some "Romeo and Juliet" thing is weird... But overall I enjoyed it, so keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 07:34 CDT
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You fruit. I am too writing.
Miffle. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 13:35 CDT
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Hmmmph. Yuy, you're not writing. Write. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 14:16 CDT
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We got a review! We got a review! (prepare for the review dance) La la la! We got a review!! Dance happy dance happy review dance happy happy happy.
Whew. That was ..weird, to say the least. I'm just very excited. TWO MORE DAYS !!! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 10:45 CDT
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Interesting story ya got here... sounds great so far. Can't wait for the next chapter! You better continue! (I can be a sucker for romance stories...) ;) |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 18:09 CDT
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What a great fic...
WEDNESDAY!! |
Reviewed By: onlytacos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 18:07 CDT
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Yeah, it is ... lol. I want Chapter Three by Wednesday. Go. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 15:29 CDT
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Tee hee! Chapter two coming up! |
Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOO! Yeah, this is the best fic I've ever read, so far! Yeah, we rock.
Heh.
This is fun--commenting on our own fic. *grin* |
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