| "August and Everything After" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kelly On: June 18, 2003 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic seems very interesting. i would like to keep readin it if u keep updating ^_^ but i agree a bit with tha person above me...more of tha actual characters woulda been good. also becuz some of the names i cant even pronounce -_- dont laugh! ------ keep updating ^_~ ------ |
Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't really like the whole concept of god and the devil and the idea of Kagome being the angel of wind was a bit weird, you could've used Kagura. And the original characters could've been Sango, Miroku and Shippou but whatever, eh? For your writing i would say its interesting the contrast between heaven and hell. Overall i would say that this is pretty good, i'll read more and review when you update, so tata for now. |
Reviewed By: Crimson Demon Keiri On: June 18, 2003 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! You don't see too many that are about this subject and that are so grealy written! |
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