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Title: LOVE IT!!
Reviewed By: HieisGirl01 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luvv this fic pleae update soon
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 19:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really a cool story, I can't wait to you update! I wish you the best of luck with this, and I'll be sure to keep reviewing Ja ne for now. Good job! =p
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Title: Inuyashafan15@aol.com
Reviewed By: princess monoke On: September 16, 2003 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love the story and the creativness behind the placings of the charicters and . . . it just makes sense! I'v red so many kag/Inu fics between heaven and hell and I have never found one that makes good sense or is written well at all (really it suks) but this fic is awsome! it's very well written and the detail in which she describes god is simply awsome. i really like the righting of this fic and I cant wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 22:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow another good fic. This one is sooo interesting! I feally like how you described god. I'm not a believer myself, but if I was THAt would be the kind of guy/girl/it I would imagine the big ude upstairs to be. i especially liked the voice bit and changing of faces. Sooo neat an idea! Hell (no pun intended) the entire story is interesting and really original! Hope you write more sooN!
ps. You have 2 chapter 3's up... |
Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 23:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mmm, short chapter, but instant attraction, i can't wait to see the rest of this. Hope you had fun during your vacation, cioao. |
Reviewed By: Inuheart On: August 04, 2003 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really impressed that you though of this cool plot! I cant wait to find out what happens! And I have been waiting for a long time,, Please update!!!!! I am begging you! |
Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 21:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Howza bout an update soon? |
Reviewed By: Crimson Demon Kerie On: June 25, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you update! Luvin the story! Do you havee this on ff.net? If you do please tell me, I would love to have you on my favorites! |
Reviewed By: Cat On: June 24, 2003 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it!
Please continue soon |
Reviewed By: Sorrow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 00:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude I love your soty and I like how you did god. Good job good job. Please write more cause its really good |
Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh shit, accidently deleted my original review, but i think your story's cool enough for another try eh? First of all i found only one spelling mistake in the beginning of the chapter, compliment. I found the idea of God being not male of female but everything and nothing interesting.
Evil humans entrapped in trees seem really creative and strange in a good way. My friend is afraid of trees... Second thing, could you elaborate more on the holidays or whatever days, which was the wind day and the fire day...
Forgot what else i was going to say now but i enjoy your story and i think it is pretty cool. Thanks for telling me about Sango, Shippou and the oc's. Miroku also showed up in this chapter, in hell! How ironic. But one last question, does it mean that you have to be dead in order to be in hell?
Oh, having Rin as a sadistic little child also seems wicked, i'm saying this as in cool ^_^.
Overall i think you did a good job, now update soon, and try not to get Inu Yasha to fall in love too soon, wouldn't be that interesting remember. Tata for now. |
Reviewed By: blankis On: June 22, 2003 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute story, can't wait for next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Kelly On: June 18, 2003 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic seems very interesting. i would like to keep readin it if u keep updating ^_^ but i agree a bit with tha person above me...more of tha actual characters woulda been good. also becuz some of the names i cant even pronounce -_- dont laugh! ------ keep updating ^_~ ------ |
Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't really like the whole concept of god and the devil and the idea of Kagome being the angel of wind was a bit weird, you could've used Kagura. And the original characters could've been Sango, Miroku and Shippou but whatever, eh? For your writing i would say its interesting the contrast between heaven and hell. Overall i would say that this is pretty good, i'll read more and review when you update, so tata for now. |
Reviewed By: Crimson Demon Keiri On: June 18, 2003 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! You don't see too many that are about this subject and that are so grealy written! |
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