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Reviewed By: millenniumspirit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a REALLY good fic, I like your ideas and the twists you include! I see 'Great Writer' stamped all over you! Please continue this fic and all your others!
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Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 17:24 CDT
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OY.. ITS GEWD.. you write good stories.. lol UPDATE kk! tankie
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 19:45 CDT
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Really awesome! The lemon was great, but the tension between the two very different people was even better. It was very realistic that sometimes one partner doesn't have as good an experience as the other. I feel sad for the both of them. Update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: October 19, 2003 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one freaking hot Marik x Ryou...*drools*
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 21:18 CDT
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That's really nice. I'm glad Ryou is finally happy! Is this the end? Well, either way, it's great! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OxBeachFlirtxO1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! This is great! Ryou really dose need to loosen up! He has Marik...FREEKING MARIK practicly on his knees begging for him to let him in. *shakes head* Well I guess Marik is sorta an ass in this story. He raped him the first night they met?!? Gees. Talk about rushing things. Well I hope things get sorted out and the marik/Jou thing gets sorted out...I cant wait for the next chapter~!!
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I know love comes up in different ways, but the way Marik treated Ryou in the beginning doesn't have me believing Ryou could feel love for him. Maybe if Marik continued trying to be nicer.
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Reviewed By: al On: September 25, 2003 21:06 CDT
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i didn't think it was really possible for anyone to write good fanfics and update so fast. way better than waiting the usual two months
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 23:49 CDT
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This is good! Marik should get his butt kicked for hurting Ryou! But at least now he's trying to change his ways. ^_^
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez Marik need to make up his mind. lol great chapter. can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: September 14, 2003 13:45 CDT
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Marik x Ryou! mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............yet another great story from Bishojo! |
Reviewed By: val gal :) On: July 07, 2003 16:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, please, PLEASE update soon! i really want to read what happens next.thanx!!!!
^_^ |
Reviewed By: val gal :) On: July 04, 2003 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kewl!!!!! i love the story so far, please update soon! poor ryou, oh well, you said it would get better for him later, right. that makes it easier to read the rape sceens.
can't wait for the next chappie! thanx! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: bakurasmistress aka ashley On: June 20, 2003 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! this fic was really great, discriptive and exciting in only its first chapter. now im hooked on another one of your stories you evil mind-controlling writer!lol^__^
also, i think this new twist between ryou and marik is very enlightening and not to mention kawaii&sexy!anyway keep up the great work! ja ne |
Reviewed By: Catsy & Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!This is so good! I am like... literally hooked. So discriptive and intimidating, shocking, and exciting all in one chappie! how do ya' do it?
Write more pwetty pleaz. Update soon, and keep up the oh so FABULOUSE (did I spell that right?) Ficcie. Laterz. |
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